Review Detail of Lemonbunzz in Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest

I really like the story. Like how story switch between the game and real life. It's like 2 different stories in one novel. But I don't really like Mark, something about this matchup that doesn't feel right. I think it's better he remains as a friend of Elayne, he ruins the story for me. Personally, without him, this would be a great novel. I know he's nice but he annoys me so much..