true, fixed

this needs more TAGS!

thanks

well yeah, because he's prideful and stuck up old man he gets embarrassed by maria's shenanigans, he also has a hard time expressing himself because he went through thousands of years of being sealed inside a dungeon. but sure you can dislike him all you want, i dont really care

click on the author's profile, there's a link to their patreon there

A pretty original story compared to everything else that's coming out recently in webnovel. Mostly leaving a review because there were barely two before

thanks :) this is just a side project for fun, so only 3 chapters a week, though they're 2k words

add tags to the novel

why would they want to contaminate heaven with his presence? no thanks

the mistake of writing whatever i want? i dont think there's a mistake in there, at least try to be subjective, your personal tastes dont mean anything to me or my writing style, and i will not adjust them to your likings

experimenting

sounds kind of weird to me, its like saying absorbing water instead of drinking water

also be careful when writing a story about a rap ist, your story could get reported

if they're slaves then they're not really villainesses, they're just poor victims, false title advertising. Was expecting cool, villanous women. Like, can't the mc just target marginalized women with potential (powers) and help them "corrupt" themselves by teaching them to let go of their inhibitions, becoming evil? it doesnt even need to be about rap e

this story needs TAGS asap

can he corrupt them without doing anything sexually to them though? because if he just abuses them then its not really corruption, they're only going to want to kill him

all dead sorry

i like writing struggles, close fights, stakes, and so on. There's nothing inherently stupid about it, these are the things I like writing, and i write them, because these are my novels, written by me, not by you, and they're not for you either, nor will they ever be written to appeal to whatever whims you have. I only write for myself, if you like or hate something of it, it doesnt matter to me.

i would disagree, chinese is probably even worse in general, the "good ones" that you're thinking about are from popular, famous and old authors. but none of those are ever going to write about a robot with a system lol, you're going to see it written by a ching chong nationalist that will drop the novel after 213 chapters