An enthusiastic fantasy writer.
I'll leave a comment: Academy plots are a bit boring, i hope it doesnt revolve around boring school activities and cliches and there's action and plot moving rapidly... Also his main goal being meeting a girl is underwhelming.
Yeah youre right, I started writing this novel in august of 2021, so i was still learning about pacing, story structuration, and focus on story progression, so there are some sloppy parts, and also some that have too many details sometimes in things that dont really matter that much, although i enjoyed writing them, i can tell that sometimes people dont care about several chapters of making potions or equipment, i've learned since then that even these things must have a connection with the main plot or tings just lose their focus and progression, though those chapters are now in the past, the last 200 chapters so far have been about a lot of progression and action, so i hope you can continue
a stupid person stays ignorant, this character is smart because he learns and grows from every mistake he comits, something you dont seem to be capable of doing, my friend
There were so many praises i thought it was some copy pasted comment, but it was really authentic. I'm glad you enjoy the story, I won't drop it until I end it, so don't worry, even if it take me years. I am rather passionate about this one.
every time in cultivation novels i see people with lower ranks beat guys with higher ranks lol