Review Detail of Chase_Xavier_123 in Beneath The Cloudy Sky

That's a great story, would love to read further. Writing Quality - It's not bad but it's not a piece of well established English literature. Don't expect it, it's unrealistic to think i can read those without sleeping. The story keeps you reading cause language is light. What's making the story feel heavy are the emotions described. there are some mistake, i would suggest the author to check them. the grammar was good, but the travel from city A to city S was confusing slightly. Story development - It slowly transitions, like it feels like a slow song playing. I loved that author took time to show rebirth rather than doing it in one chapter. Character design - Though i won't say anything about Ning since her character is new and info given was small to say anything except for her depression, sadness which she tries to mask. (should be hard cause the way she lash out to Feng, either ling is too dense to notice it or its her character flaw (flaws are okay it's not authors fault every character is flawed in a way.)) Feng as the story says he is in denial that Ning means anything to him he tries to help her either way. He is helpful (too helpful), as we see how he saves Kai even his own mother was late. Ling and her husband, Should i hate them or like them? I can only do one 👀, i will wait to decide. but upto now ling is being a good best friend though. but compared to yuan she is nothing. updating Stability - Just putting one chapter out there needs, idea, outline, writing it, procastinating whilst finding character names for new characters, lots of reasearch, editing, grammar check, and courage to put it out. 🎉 try your best author you are doing great. World background - It's simple as story is done in modern times,a little bit work with how you define place of scene happening. Rest was too good the nova and the old lady this stands out compared to other rebirth reincarnation novels. Give it try people the story won't disappoint 😁.