Yo, I am Crocs, and this is my first time trying my hand in writing novels. There are definitely shortcomings, but I’m learning more as I continue to write the story. Hope you guys enjoy it!
Crocs_is_Dead
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LIKEthis story is great Crocs. however...Damien is your main character of course. but he isnt your ONLY main character. I'm still on the primordial unending tree chapters right now..aka "struggle 8" to be exact. dont know what you got after this but..Please do not neglect Elena and Rose. sure..damien is having regrets on how he treated them..but what exactly are they doing right now? we need continuous updates on your other main characters. they are just as important as Damien is..on their road to strength and seemingly war. they are important too. Please do not neglect Ruyue and Qing'er or Qin Tan either, once he decides to go visit them finally. For the same reasons. each and every character that had an impact on his life should stay in his life. dont just drop them off somewhere and be like "aite peace bro" Other than that. exceptional storytelling. keep it up Crocs!
There’s romance. I just didn’t add the romance tag since the harem tag is already there and I didn’t feel the need
Jheydi327:No romance ?
You should add Romance tag. Seasoned readers see Romance and Harem tags differently. IMO, if its Harem only then I assume that the MC is just collecting pokemon and there's barely to no development between MC and his harem. While if it has Romance then we expect to see fluff moments and development progress between him and the girls.
Crocs_is_Dead:There’s romance. I just didn’t add the romance tag since the harem tag is already there and I didn’t feel the need
Honestly at the point I am in I jusyt love the novel and I don't usually do this unless I actually like it which is the suggestion where u do bonus chapters for power stones and tickets For example every 200 chapters u add an extra chapter than the original upload rate this will excite alot of people and make them use there power stones on ur novel