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Dcelano
DcelanoLv42yrDcelano

................................................................................. You kill it why he have to tell the other he came from the world that loot at their world from commic book.

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Aden Strong: Avatar In DC

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CalvinTheLeecher
CalvinTheLeecherLv6CalvinTheLeecher

Thanks for the warning dude.

OukisLips
OukisLipsLv14OukisLips

Thanks for the warning. From the sound of it, the author broke the most important rule of reincarnation/transmigration novels

Dazai_Osamu_2088
Dazai_Osamu_2088Lv1Dazai_Osamu_2088

Seriously, he has just destroyed a fanfic with good potential😂😂😂😂

Gambit_bandit
Gambit_banditLv4Gambit_bandit

Maybe you should read it first? Manhunter read his mind. 😒

OukisLips:Thanks for the warning. From the sound of it, the author broke the most important rule of reincarnation/transmigration novels
MurderMoon
MurderMoonLv12MurderMoon

You realise there’s literally a mind reading alien on the justice league right?

MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5MorningWood_Dao

what's wrong with telling secrets like that? you do realize that there are so much more op people who's goal is worse than looting right? superman alone isn't that good at keeping secret of himself. you guys still like him.

Dazai_Osamu_2088
Dazai_Osamu_2088Lv1Dazai_Osamu_2088

but the guy kept the secret of these powers for a long time to his fiance (to my knowledge) and these secrets did not have such a large existential dimension🤨

MorningWood_Dao:what's wrong with telling secrets like that? you do realize that there are so much more op people who's goal is worse than looting right? superman alone isn't that good at keeping secret of himself. you guys still like him.
MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5MorningWood_Dao

so far, he had no fiance. he shared his secret to Martian hunter and batman, that alone should be enough.

Dazai_Osamu_2088:but the guy kept the secret of these powers for a long time to his fiance (to my knowledge) and these secrets did not have such a large existential dimension🤨
Dazai_Osamu_2088
Dazai_Osamu_2088Lv1Dazai_Osamu_2088

Batman 🤦‍♂️

MorningWood_Dao:so far, he had no fiance. he shared his secret to Martian hunter and batman, that alone should be enough.
alivegolden1
alivegolden1Lv5alivegolden1

What’ wrong with keeping secrets, that’s the things

MorningWood_Dao:what's wrong with telling secrets like that? you do realize that there are so much more op people who's goal is worse than looting right? superman alone isn't that good at keeping secret of himself. you guys still like him.
alivegolden1
alivegolden1Lv5alivegolden1

I hate how people think Mc shouldn’t have or keep secret to himself, or how Mc think he shouldn’t keep secret even though he does anyway

Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6Hentai_Senchou

That's just a cheap cop out from authors that are too lazy to make the mc face hardship.

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Adam_Clinton
Adam_ClintonLv13Adam_Clinton

Telling the secret of transmigration and fictional world ruins a story, that is why the mc should have plot armour in regards to this. If there is a mind-reader, then the mc should have some technique or item to stop intrusions, if there is someone good at detecting lies, then they shouldn't have any conversations that could give away the mc. You can say it's cheap, but I'd rather have one small piece of plot armour than to ruin a story.

Desturi0n
Desturi0nLv15Desturi0n

whats wrong with telling? I was always a fan of disclosing that information somewhere in a story. Even in DC it was always questionable to me that gods are paying attention 24/7 to everyone.

UnderChain
UnderChainLv11UnderChain

If he just said he came from another world, ok, but revealing that he knows the history of the comics is IQ -

alivegolden1
alivegolden1Lv5alivegolden1

What’s wrong with not telling

Desturi0n:whats wrong with telling? I was always a fan of disclosing that information somewhere in a story. Even in DC it was always questionable to me that gods are paying attention 24/7 to everyone.
abcdefghi987654321
abcdefghi987654321Lv3abcdefghi987654321

How could the mc have plot armor when batman have all the plot armor

Adam_Clinton:Telling the secret of transmigration and fictional world ruins a story, that is why the mc should have plot armour in regards to this. If there is a mind-reader, then the mc should have some technique or item to stop intrusions, if there is someone good at detecting lies, then they shouldn't have any conversations that could give away the mc. You can say it's cheap, but I'd rather have one small piece of plot armour than to ruin a story.
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

Let me guess, since some one said a hero read his mind, then the MC must've panic'd like some beta and revealed everything under the small amount of peer pressure. Well that is what I got from these comments. And if true, gg

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv5Demiurge_Ohara

JooCan
JooCanLv4JooCan

thank you

Eid_zack
Eid_zackLv4Eid_zack

this is out of topic but I hate superman and batman ideology or principle of non killing for villain

MorningWood_Dao:what's wrong with telling secrets like that? you do realize that there are so much more op people who's goal is worse than looting right? superman alone isn't that good at keeping secret of himself. you guys still like him.