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i_dont_know_if_he
i_dont_know_if_heLv42yri_dont_know_if_he

Why is he so verbose with words? why call "carcasse" instead of body and what are taurus. It feels like I'm reading a medical book instead of a naruto fanfic, the sentences are too...something that I can't describe. What is an interculotor ore whatever it said. Write simple words for simple minds, too complicated vocabulary confuses some readers.

The right Shinobi

FlaBer

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rusik500
rusik500Lv14rusik500

this is russian fanfiction author.today/work/164853

Sirione:where can i find the original? does he have the same title?
Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15Gh0st00

I don't know why you gave him four and a half freaking Stars it ain't even worth that he's trying to be sophisticated using big words for a fanfic you are catering to the wrong customers their buddy not to mention he uses big words and try to be all sophisticated and smart but he forgot these in a conversation " "

FlaBer
FlaBerAuthorFlaBer

This is a reind. In many ways very verbatim.

_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5_oinkchan

If you use such complicated words in your story it will be harder than mtl.

FlaBer:This is a reind. In many ways very verbatim.
KingOfLakes0_0
KingOfLakes0_0Lv10KingOfLakes0_0

reind isn't really a word. And you are looking for verbose not verbatim, verbatim is only used when directly quoting something without paraphrasing

FlaBer:This is a reind. In many ways very verbatim.
Sirione
SirioneLv5Sirione

where can i find the original? does he have the same title?

FlaBer:This is a reind. In many ways very verbatim.
grimmhorizon
grimmhorizonLv14grimmhorizon

Taurus is a brand of handgun which makes no sense lol

EugenSimion
EugenSimionLv14EugenSimion

Thank you! I knew the fic was from somewhere else the moment I read Hugo in place of Hyuga.

rusik500:this is russian fanfiction author.today/work/164853
Transhumanist
TranshumanistLv14Transhumanist

FlaBer:This is a reind. In many ways very verbatim.
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5Deadrule_vivek

imagine Hugo as a clan in konoha

EugenSimion:Thank you! I knew the fic was from somewhere else the moment I read Hugo in place of Hyuga.
Pacifist_Warrior
Pacifist_WarriorLv4Pacifist_Warrior

lol author 🤣 now what's verbatim

FlaBer:This is a reind. In many ways very verbatim.
Lc_The_Second
Lc_The_SecondLv3Lc_The_Second

Makes sense if you know the brand took the name from. Hint: The name comes from Latim/Greek anf it's an animal.

grimmhorizon:Taurus is a brand of handgun which makes no sense lol