Why is he so verbose with words? why call "carcasse" instead of body and what are taurus. It feels like I'm reading a medical book instead of a naruto fanfic, the sentences are too...something that I can't describe. What is an interculotor ore whatever it said. Write simple words for simple minds, too complicated vocabulary confuses some readers.
FlaBer
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LIKEI don't know why you gave him four and a half freaking Stars it ain't even worth that he's trying to be sophisticated using big words for a fanfic you are catering to the wrong customers their buddy not to mention he uses big words and try to be all sophisticated and smart but he forgot these in a conversation " "
reind isn't really a word. And you are looking for verbose not verbatim, verbatim is only used when directly quoting something without paraphrasing
FlaBer:This is a reind. In many ways very verbatim.
EugenSimion:Thank you! I knew the fic was from somewhere else the moment I read Hugo in place of Hyuga.
Makes sense if you know the brand took the name from. Hint: The name comes from Latim/Greek anf it's an animal.
grimmhorizon:Taurus is a brand of handgun which makes no sense lol