Review Detail of Mister_Op in My Magical Harem System

Hey Man, i just found your work. Any chance MC will be on the Evil side?

Not completely. Ardor Flame is an anithero MC. So while he won't go out the way to do evil, he won't stop himself from it if that helps him accomplish his goals.

Did I read the synopsis right and the women don't know he's with other women? Because to me that doesn't sound like a harem, more like one dude cheating on a whole bunch of women.

Is it really harem if none of the supposed harem members know? Seems more like cheating.

Initially, the women don't know that they're with the same man. But he does not directly cheat on them as he uses an unconventional method. Overall, I can say you won't feel he's cheating on his women, since he solves the problem pretty soon, by chapter 10, if I remember right.

First of all, as stated in the synopsis, this is not your typical harem novel, but you will still get typical harem as you read the story. Ardor (the mc) also gets a proper harem whose harem members know each other. If you read till chapter 10, I'm sure you'll understand how this'll happen.

Yeah that one doesn't really fit well with me as it is basically the same as a clone. It would be one thing if he was in complete control of both, but it is no different from a clone as he separated that part from himself. A clone is a copy of himself with it's own consciousness, this is literally the same exact thing but made slightly differently. If they're going to know about each other eventually anyway then that makes even less sense why you'd do such a thing.

It will take some time for Ardor's harem to arrive as he's currently solving the 3rd condition of his ultimate mission.

so wait is like this, that mc has harem but MC's clone also has harem who is like basically mc yet not?

I don't have plans to give Lance a proper harem since only Bella is actually his harem member and the others are servants/slaves. As the plot progresses, you will understand the deeper reason for Ardor's creation of Lance.

Your latest comment was auto deleted. Don't use words that will be censored. and there is no c..u.. .ck.. .lo.. d planned for this novel. I agree it's disgusting.

so Only True Mc will have Harem? and Lance will only have bella and maybe like umm S€x slaves

[Spoiler Alert] Lance/Lust was made to farm LPs for Ardor. I have specifically mentioned the type of women he can do it with, and I intend to keep it that way.

And yes, only Ardor will have a true harem since he's the MC

as long as lance/lust doesn't have harem of 'Mc' it's fine..

good*

I don't blame you for asking. I was actually trying to say good instead of that. I know that novel you've mentioned. That entire novel world is pretty disgusting in my opinion. Shows how messed up the people in the world are to even imagine something like that.

hey ummm did you drop it? are you gonna continue the novel?

There was a real life issue that needed my immediate attention. I'll get back to writing real soon.