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Review Detail of CrimsonStaR in Shadow Slave

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CrimsonStaR
CrimsonStaRLv21yrCrimsonStaR

I read upto 265+ chapters and here's what can say about this novel :- #Very good start, volume 1 was pretty good, it was fresh very interesting world building and power system, everything was good. # Charater development was good in vol1 but here all good things end as soon as you enter volume 2 it's become trash. # no development in vol2 its just snail pace story and Mc regress, instead of become smart and calculative he becomes dumb and stupid. # most of the chapter in vol2 are unnecessary as they are just filled with trash, useless talk. # After reading vol. 2 I think author should change the name of novel from Shadow slave to Women's slave because I think the way its going he will become women's slave before shadow slave. # Very disappointed, I don't know what went wrong with author, imo he just ruined the vol2 its so slow paced + Mc becomes dumb from smart its horrifying, I believe he got subdued by girl, afterall what can you expect. It's trash I won't be continue reading it unless. The first nightmare(awakening) ends and may be if it get better after that. Untill then I recommend you to not read it if you don't want to read about how an good Mc become trash + snail like plot speed, you will find yourself skipping most chapter after vol2(they reach castle). Very disappointed.

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Blacklotus
BlacklotusLv12Blacklotus

Bro I completely agree with you, mc turned into a simp. Read my review as well if you have time (just posted)

daoist_buttlover
daoist_buttloverLv2daoist_buttlover

It's hilarious that webnovel readers see a single strong female character and automatically assume the MC is a simp. He is literally a slave. It's the name of the book.

Blacklotus:Bro I completely agree with you, mc turned into a simp. Read my review as well if you have time (just posted)
Blacklotus
BlacklotusLv12Blacklotus

im not sure being a slave is better than being a simp

daoist_buttlover:It's hilarious that webnovel readers see a single strong female character and automatically assume the MC is a simp. He is literally a slave. It's the name of the book.
7thApostle
7thApostleLv117thApostle

No I don’t find myself skipping through the 2nd arc at all. in fact, I find arc 2 much better than the 1st arc. I won’t argue with you, cuz through your logic I think you are the type who will enjoy reading instant noodle novels like 99.9% the ones on webnovel and despise LOTM. Whatever man.

L_Poren
L_PorenLv1L_Poren

Hopefully that will change soon. Sunny said he'd be the last man standing a few times..

L_Poren
L_PorenLv1L_Poren

That's nonsense. It's called "Shadow Slave" (mysterious) not "Changing Star's Simp Boy, Sunny." We don't like bait and switch, and there's no shortage of strong wamen in novels.

daoist_buttlover:It's hilarious that webnovel readers see a single strong female character and automatically assume the MC is a simp. He is literally a slave. It's the name of the book.
Trash_Mix
Trash_MixLv12Trash_Mix

okay so... MC has something to gain from doing something for a girl and he's a simp? (Sounds wrong) He got revenge on the thing that made him crack and go coocoo for coco puffs, also don't you think that they may have a sort of friendly relationship because of the 11 months they've spent together?

L_Poren
L_PorenLv1L_Poren

Spoilers Below.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... How deep can their relationship be if Nephis is willing to sacrifice everyone to achieve her goals? Sunny doesn't like the prophecy, yet he hasn't bothered changing it. Sunny has been reckless and without much free will since the second nightmare. It's understandable that readers think he's becoming a simp. I'll read more before deciding that. Now quit trying to be the review police.

Trash_Mix:okay so... MC has something to gain from doing something for a girl and he's a simp? (Sounds wrong) He got revenge on the thing that made him crack and go coocoo for coco puffs, also don't you think that they may have a sort of friendly relationship because of the 11 months they've spent together?
PlebLord
PlebLordLv4PlebLord

Some people tried to defend the book, but all their arguments come down to the humiliation of people with opposite opinions. Instead of refuting the opposing side's arguments, they denied the opposing side's competence to speak its mind. Usually, in an argument, this happens when a bad debater runs out of arguments. It's funny that these guys used this technique from the very beginning.

7thApostle:No I don’t find myself skipping through the 2nd arc at all. in fact, I find arc 2 much better than the 1st arc. I won’t argue with you, cuz through your logic I think you are the type who will enjoy reading instant noodle novels like 99.9% the ones on webnovel and despise LOTM. Whatever man.
_Bruh
_BruhLv12_Bruh

Incels and edgelords deserve to be humiliated.

PlebLord:Some people tried to defend the book, but all their arguments come down to the humiliation of people with opposite opinions. Instead of refuting the opposing side's arguments, they denied the opposing side's competence to speak its mind. Usually, in an argument, this happens when a bad debater runs out of arguments. It's funny that these guys used this technique from the very beginning.
_Bruh
_BruhLv12_Bruh

plus you copy-pasted this comment verbatim lolol

PlebLord:Some people tried to defend the book, but all their arguments come down to the humiliation of people with opposite opinions. Instead of refuting the opposing side's arguments, they denied the opposing side's competence to speak its mind. Usually, in an argument, this happens when a bad debater runs out of arguments. It's funny that these guys used this technique from the very beginning.
PlebLord
PlebLordLv4PlebLord

Yeah, when I read it for the first time, I immediately copy it to my note. Because I know I can use it many times against particularly stup*d people on this platform.

_Bruh:plus you copy-pasted this comment verbatim lolol
_Bruh
_BruhLv12_Bruh

Some people tried to defend incels and edgelords, but all their arguments come down to the humiliation of people with opposite opinions. Instead of refuting the opposing side's arguments, they denied the opposing side's competence to speak its mind. Usually, in an argument, this happens when a bad debater runs out of arguments. It's funny that you used this technique before calling people with differing opinions on this app stupid.

PlebLord:Yeah, when I read it for the first time, I immediately copy it to my note. Because I know I can use it many times against particularly stup*d people on this platform.
PlebLord
PlebLordLv4PlebLord

Good job 👍

_Bruh:Some people tried to defend incels and edgelords, but all their arguments come down to the humiliation of people with opposite opinions. Instead of refuting the opposing side's arguments, they denied the opposing side's competence to speak its mind. Usually, in an argument, this happens when a bad debater runs out of arguments. It's funny that you used this technique before calling people with differing opinions on this app stupid.
_Bruh
_BruhLv12_Bruh

PlebLord:Good job 👍
PlebLord
PlebLordLv4PlebLord

_Bruh:
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Amal_Tassimov
Amal_TassimovLv2Amal_Tassimov

Changes in MC personality are logical and understandable, people change and influence each other in many subtle ways, that's why MC and Changing Star both changed. He spent several months alone and his mental state deteriorated. Human life is not only about constant progress, that's why it feels more realistic.

Illy_Ann
Illy_AnnLv10Illy_Ann

Thank You. The change was logical MC even explained his "regression" in the book. People need to paid attention.

Amal_Tassimov:Changes in MC personality are logical and understandable, people change and influence each other in many subtle ways, that's why MC and Changing Star both changed. He spent several months alone and his mental state deteriorated. Human life is not only about constant progress, that's why it feels more realistic.
v_nolan
v_nolanLv1v_nolan

seeing your user name I doubt it is worth replying to you, but I just have to point out thay you should write strong fmc without having constantly clowning the mc, which for some reason seems really hard for authors to do. But then again if marvel authors are doing that I doubt web novel authors can do any better. Also, if fmc were male he would be called edgy, and anyone who likes him vigin incel. all her charctersics are despsied most of the time in male lead charcters. we just want the character we were alluded to in the early chapters. is that to much to ask?

daoist_buttlover:It's hilarious that webnovel readers see a single strong female character and automatically assume the MC is a simp. He is literally a slave. It's the name of the book.
v_nolan
v_nolanLv1v_nolan

her character is basically egdelord. you don't notice it because she fmc. she even say she wouldn't mind sacrificing all people including him lol. if anything she sounds incely, and you are so for calling that kind of charcter strong (I assume you think she is).

_Bruh:Incels and edgelords deserve to be humiliated.