@Guiltythree Great work, the first place in top is well worth. Is there a way to support you from Russia? Payments are not accepted

I haven't seen any novel as interesting as this one. A true rare gem with slow but meaningful pace, live characters and lore. Definitely worth reading.

@GuiltyThree MC is not a gay and I don't see a reason why it should change. He is attracted to women's beauty and that's cool. It would be even better if he didn't shy away from his thoughts as many male characters in novels, because we know that gaze and thoughts drawn to beauty, especially in his age, is natural. He could even bang someone along the journey as a certain witcher 😅😂

really interesting, this book has so much potential. I really hope the author will continue it someday or start something new in this setting with people and wraithes.

Will there be POV of different key characters ? I think it would be interesting to have a glimpse of what is happening in forgotten shore with Nephis in parallel with the current time

The author definitely has coffee issues :)

I hope Sunny's friends will reunite at some point of time as allies, not enemies.

Interesting novel, live, really human characters with emotions, great world setting. Started to read the novel after catching up with Shadow Slave. I think this novel is definitely worth a try

what if Cassie revealing his name actually prevented something even more terrible in the future? We may still don't know the full picture. I can't understand why everyone is so hell bent on revenge for Cassie? It would be stupid and out of character for Sunny to harm the poor girl.

I actually think that Changing Star is the most rational and pragmatic character here. Her so hated and despised manipulations actually led to humanity gaining a hundred exceptionally strong awakened instead of none if the things continued unchanged like main character wanted at some point of time.

Why Cassie has to choose Sunny over Changing Star? Because he is the main character? Changing Star saved Cassie countless times without expecting anything, just because she wanted to, while Sunny thought of Cassie as nothing more than a burden until much later. Every character here has its own well justified reason and Cassie choosing Nephis is understandable.

I think the author shouldn't be swayed by complains about 2nd volume's ending. It's a cruel fate, but I don't see a reason why MC should kill or even hate Cassie or Changing Star. Actually it's no biggie, given that there's no malicious intent from his Master and Cassie. But I think if Changing Star didn't explain him the effect of soul conduit and just lured him into the portal first under pretense of going right after him - it wouldn't be so sad.

In the 2nd volume I think skipping time and returning to it after instead of a straight narration was a bad idea

She is much more experienced and her personality, looks, charisma and aspects makes her perfect for desperate people to worship. She's like a shining light while Sunny is her opposite. He operates in the dark but probably serves the light?

Changes in MC personality are logical and understandable, people change and influence each other in many subtle ways, that's why MC and Changing Star both changed. He spent several months alone and his mental state deteriorated. Human life is not only about constant progress, that's why it feels more realistic.

Fascinating, original plot. I like deep, well written alive characters, absence of dramatic silly heroism and plenty of rational thinking. I find the main character being not overpowered and without absurd plot armor is the best, please keep it that way. That exactly what gives readers much desired tension. P.S Your writing pace is astonishing, I really hope you won't exhaust yourself which will affect your health and more importantly the quality of your writing)

Reading "Free Fall" after catching up with current last chapter of "Shadow Slave". Really good, fascinating, original. Actually, I'm amazed by stunning speed and quality of of your writing. I hope keeping such pace won't affect your health or skill.