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Review Detail of Lord_Luzifer_ in Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.

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Lord_Luzifer_
Lord_Luzifer_Lv141yrLord_Luzifer_

The idea is nice but unfortunately it feels like you are reading the essay of a grade school kid. The grammar is … well non existent.

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Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.

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Daoistm9K4kB
Daoistm9K4kBLv4Daoistm9K4kB

the story is good who cares for grammar

KFCmicchicken
KFCmicchickenLv14KFCmicchicken

Cause u can’t tell what your reading then

Daoistm9K4kB:the story is good who cares for grammar
Adam_Clinton
Adam_ClintonLv13Adam_Clinton

The definition of irony

KFCmicchicken:Cause u can’t tell what your reading then
Priyanshu_Gupta_1532
Priyanshu_Gupta_1532Lv4Priyanshu_Gupta_1532

Pfft-

AncientAbyss
AncientAbyssLv15AncientAbyss

Due to the grammar I just can't get into the novel so I'm gonna have to drop it

Daoistm9K4kB:the story is good who cares for grammar
GodOfPeacefulDeath
GodOfPeacefulDeathLv2GodOfPeacefulDeath

You should use it as well

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Allen_Vinkaldr
Allen_VinkaldrLv2Allen_Vinkaldr

your sentence should have Theor as The and is on the last sentence as are

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Allen_Vinkaldr
Allen_VinkaldrLv2Allen_Vinkaldr

sorry I had to mess up my typing to the point aoutocorrect gave up as in my sentence is is

Allen_Vinkaldr:your sentence should have Theor as The and is on the last sentence as are
Allen_Vinkaldr
Allen_VinkaldrLv2Allen_Vinkaldr

K I got to fix my outocrrect your typing terrified it and made it commit suicide

Allen_Vinkaldr:sorry I had to mess up my typing to the point aoutocorrect gave up as in my sentence is is
GodOfPeacefulDeath
GodOfPeacefulDeathLv2GodOfPeacefulDeath

Hmmm... let's see... Using Theor instead of Their, using 'nobody use it' instead of 'nobody uses it', Oh right! I must be stupid because I definitely don't have the grammarly extension and it's not highlighting those mistakes! Wait! More in your last comment! Sweet!let's see... typing 'you want troll? go troll somewhere else' instead of 'you want to troll? go troll somewhere else' and using 'dont try start war' instead of 'don't try to start a war'

Allen_Vinkaldr
Allen_VinkaldrLv2Allen_Vinkaldr

No I don't troll I state what I think I don't care about your opinion in any way qnd I didn't use it to annoy you but seriously the grammar scared me to death with how you asked others to use gramerly but yet your grammar isn't good either

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Allen_Vinkaldr
Allen_VinkaldrLv2Allen_Vinkaldr

hmm🤨what😀okay😇let's do this😈

Allen_Vinkaldr
Allen_VinkaldrLv2Allen_Vinkaldr

Talk about being but hurt. Look at your messages, ignore a few and you just continue.

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Bad_gurl
Bad_gurlLv4Bad_gurl

Allen_Vinkaldr:Talk about being but hurt. Look at your messages, ignore a few and you just continue.
Spirit_Immortal
Spirit_ImmortalLv4Spirit_Immortal

bro....check out my NOVELs

Daoistm9K4kB:the story is good who cares for grammar