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But if she wants to be with another one who is he to deny her of that? Isnt this the definition of a bad guy if he wants to posess her as a trophy without thinking about her desires? I mean she already countinued the lineage so her obligation to the family is finished rightđ¤ˇđźââď¸
what? who does not want to see that dude have to wear a green hat?
Yeah i read the next chapter but still, his mom is from one of the major powers in the universe, even though she is injured, she or her subordinates should be strong enough to enter some small realm of a low level world right? But I have to say i like the world setting and the story has much potential, maybe after getting a bit more expirience you will re write the story and make it feel more alive. There are to few conversations and emotions so far, so it is kinda hard to read and i guess many might drop the story because of that?
So if Agnes is going to be his first Fey girl, what about the second one of the pair? Is it the godmother which conforms to his mother con preferences? Then what about Valentina?, is she going to be part of a new category like a master/disciple pair? Or will she be forgotten?
There are quite a few things that are bothering me so far, like the pace of the story or that you are not able to put yourself into the role of the MC while reading. But this chapter is by far the most disturbing thing that happend in the story so far. It is kinda unrealistic that his soul that was nearly completely consumed suddenly is healed again. Furthermore it happend because of what? Some memorys of a past life? I dont know but isnt the MC mother kinda OP in this world? How come she did not give him anything for protection or send some maids to protect him in secret?
It is nice that his character developes. Better than just a man child throwing a tantrum and living only in vengance just because he was an ignorant fool that was betrayed in the past.