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GodOfPeacefulDeath

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2023-06-19 JoinedUnited States
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath4mth
    Replied to Monarch_Lord

    author ded

    While the ritual worked, Leo was still in the egg. While Zeritha and Helius waited for it to hatch, they decided on names for their child they would soon meet. They agreed on "Zelio", the name of the first clan chief of the Zel clan.
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    A Demon King's half-dragon Son is being left to his own devices
    Fantasy · CatLeone
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath4mth
    Commented

    Also, for the sake of God, use Quillbot or Grammaly, I can't emphasise how important grammar is, use Quillbot or Grammaly (latter is recommended).

    Ch 3 Chapter 2: Everything before Leo was kicked out of Hell: Part 1
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    A Demon King's half-dragon Son is being left to his own devices
    Fantasy · CatLeone
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath4mth
    Commented

    Make a line break between every 4-5 lines, sometimes 2. Atleast make it readable.

    Ch 3 Chapter 2: Everything before Leo was kicked out of Hell: Part 1
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    A Demon King's half-dragon Son is being left to his own devices
    Fantasy · CatLeone
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath4mth
    Replied to GodOfPeacefulDeath

    By prologue I mean synopsis

    Ch 2 Chapter 1: Getting a job
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    A Demon King's half-dragon Son is being left to his own devices
    Fantasy · CatLeone
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath4mth
    Commented

    Delete this chapter, take all the text,ake it a little better. And put in as the synopsis.

    Ch 1 A Demon King's half-dragon Son is being left to his own devices
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    A Demon King's half-dragon Son is being left to his own devices
    Fantasy · CatLeone
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath4mth
    Replied to GodOfPeacefulDeath

    Web novel counts only letters in words, not numbers or symbols

    Ch 2 Chapter 1: Getting a job
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    A Demon King's half-dragon Son is being left to his own devices
    Fantasy · CatLeone
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath4mth
    Commented

    Uh... you should definitely make the chapter longer, maybe around 800 words (1k is minimum for a successful novel, but you're new). And you should write a prologue to your novel, people ain't gonna read a novel if they don't know the basic details.

    Ch 2 Chapter 1: Getting a job
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    A Demon King's half-dragon Son is being left to his own devices
    Fantasy · CatLeone
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath4mth
    Replied to CatatonicDroplet_E

    bro's god

    Through the manipulation of the Electromagnetic Force using a Hyper-dimensional Forge, I was able to create a metal that has some of the highest melting temperatures in the Universe. When I told Jeanne of this fact after the Demon had asked whether or not the facility can handle 2 S-ranks duking it out, she was visibly thrilled and hugged me, much to the annoyance of Arcueid.
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    Inspired Inventor (Tensura AU)
    Anime & Comics · unit_201
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath4mth
    Replied to GodOfPeacefulDeath

    web novel

    'Is she an angle... No even angle isn't this beautiful.'
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    Tensura: Broken Heart
    Anime & Comics · GodOfPeacefulDeath
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath4mth
    Replied to BeRhod

    uhh... are you talking to a ghost? I have abandoned novel because of my father's death.

    'Is she an angle... No even angle isn't this beautiful.'
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    Tensura: Broken Heart
    Anime & Comics · GodOfPeacefulDeath
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath6mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 2 2: Plans
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    My Fintech Empire
    Sci-fi · AloneHonored
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath6mth
    Commented

    As of right now, that novel looks pretty good. But I think the grammar could be improved.

    Ch 1 1: Transmigration
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    My Fintech Empire
    Sci-fi · AloneHonored
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath9mth
    Replied to Saberswordguy
    That's right, whether it was the shockwave, the heat, or the radiation, they were all nothing to the Exosuit. All forms of kinetic and natural elemental damage were completely blocked and the majority of special energy damage like lasers, psion beams, dark matter weapons, etc were easily resisted.
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    I am the God of Technology
    Sci-fi · Kotario
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath9mth
    Posted

    Ok so, this novel is very good and heres my review on it!World Background: the author did a really nice job on describing the world, only few authors do this MC personality: MC's personality is really good! I like sly and dark MC's veery much! so 5 stars here.Update Schedule: I want more, 4-5 chapters can't satisfy my need! good stories don't have much chapters updated per week, so putting this in my library so I can binge read later!Story Development: Till now, the author did a really good job at story development. I don't know ABOUT the future though!P.S: author, when are you planning to make lock chapters? (if you will do it)

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    Evil Devourer: Chaos Bringer in Futuristic World
    Sci-fi · MarudameOssan
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath9mth
    Commented

    😍

    Ch 33 DON'T UNLOCK THIS CHAPTER, SKIP IT.
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    The Earth After Rebirth
    Fantasy · Arrkein
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath9mth
    Replied to shashank_bhatt

    hey! In one of the novels, you said that you wanted Marvelous DragonBall translated? I can do it!

    Ch 2 Beautiful Dancer Sara Lance
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    DC: Justice League’s Green Arrow With Custom Skills
    Anime & Comics · Agent_Spider
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath9mth
    Commented
    Unique Skill, [Sacrifice]
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    Alter Dimension: Lucky Dungeon Master
    Fantasy · YouthGod
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath9mth
    Replied to Morrocan_Daoist

    cuz Alter Is in the title, and authors like to refer to the title, hence the brackets

    All because of the Alter(nate) Dimension!
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    Alter Dimension: Lucky Dungeon Master
    Fantasy · YouthGod
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath9mth
    Replied to cmluis

    shhhh~ Chatgpt~

    In addition to his academic pursuits, Napoleon was also focused on maintaining his physical health. He was aware of the historical record indicating that Napoleon, whom he had become in this world, had been of average height for his time. However, he believed that he could alter his own height by changing his diet. To that end, he incorporated regular milk consumption into his routine, as he had learned it could promote bone growth. He also made a point to include plenty of protein-rich foods like meat and fish in his diet to support his muscle development. Additionally, he recognized the importance of eating fruits and vegetables, as they provided essential vitamins and minerals crucial for maintaining good health.
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    Reincarnated as Napoleon
    History · SorryImJustDiamond
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  • GodOfPeacefulDeath
    GodOfPeacefulDeath9mth
    Replied to Lordium

    Its already completed blud: I can't edit it now.

    Argh!!! I will forgive them this time they both looked pathic while bowing.
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    Tensura: Broken Heart
    Anime & Comics · GodOfPeacefulDeath
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