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Review Detail of Alekzi in White Online

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Alekzi
AlekziAuthor2yrAlekzi

After writing 100 chapters, I decided to do a new author review. I have gotten a great response so far, and that gave me a boost of motivation to keep writing this; and after writing 100 chapters, I already know that the story is only beginning, there is so much left to write, and I have a hunch that it will take easily over 1000 chapters to complete, maybe even 2000. Second, I have gotten a few toxic messages about how MC's looks, because he looks girly and is around 170cm, so I have gotten a lot of messages about making him taller, etc., and that may happen or may not, I am not going to spoil it, but I have reasoning for his looks and his height, and none of those will change before I am ready to reveal the reasoning of his looks and what happened in his childhood. Third, I have written a lot of mystery, and I enjoyed it immensely. I have given a few subtle hints on the chapters that might reveal why MC is different from the rest, and that White Online isn't as normal as it seems at first, so good luck on finding those. Fourth, I have seen a few theories made by my readers, and I am sometimes terrified of how well you guys found out about some things which still haven't been revealed yet; it is nice to see all kinds of theories, even though some aren't correct, but it is still nice to read those. Fifth, about a love interest. Some of you guys might have read the synopsis and seen the tags, but I will still say this. This will be a No Harem novel with only one love interest, and even if some of you guys like Harem, you guys should still try and who knows, some of you might like it. I decided to lock the chapters only around the 53th chap so that everyone has enough time to read and find out if they like it enough to keep paying for more chapters. Thanks, everyone for reading, and I hope you guys support me in this very long journey.

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White Online

Alekzi

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Disfigured
DisfiguredLv3Disfigured

don't change his looks, There are hundreds of novels out there in which mc looks so hot that every girl he meets falls in love with him, it's refreshing to read a novel with feminine looks

Thanatio
ThanatioLv13Thanatio

You have my support

itsmeJoe
itsmeJoeLv12itsmeJoe

yeah like cultivation novels all men drools after the FMC and fight to take her away from the mc here the girls fight to be with MC its refreshing indeed

Disfigured:don't change his looks, There are hundreds of novels out there in which mc looks so hot that every girl he meets falls in love with him, it's refreshing to read a novel with feminine looks
Snow_Tear
Snow_TearLv1Snow_Tear

No harem = I'm in.

TotalDuck
TotalDuckLv1TotalDuck

I support u all the wayy

Keimuru
KeimuruLv13Keimuru

Nice, 2000 chaps let's gooo

Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv3Salmon_El_Solomon

This question is just out of curiosity, why make so many love affairs if it is a non-harem novel? There's Amanda (her childhood friend), the younger sister, a crazy woman who created a cult, the goddess, the 3 girls who were beta players and Luna, the girl with the disease...

yb48
yb48Lv13yb48

this is the result of anti harem reader virus?🤣🤣🤣

Salmon_El_Solomon:This question is just out of curiosity, why make so many love affairs if it is a non-harem novel? There's Amanda (her childhood friend), the younger sister, a crazy woman who created a cult, the goddess, the 3 girls who were beta players and Luna, the girl with the disease...
Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv3Salmon_El_Solomon

No, it's really just curiosity. To be exact, is it because he explicitly says that the novel is not harem, but then he goes and the mc has a lot of tangles? Because of how the story has developed so far, I personally would like the mc to end with a harem, if he develops it well, there would be a lot of content and many comic scenes, for example, imagine a fight between the goddess and her little sister, with a moon trying to calm them down, so that her friend joins in and put up more of a fight,

yb48:this is the result of anti harem reader virus?🤣🤣🤣
Lemon_Pope
Lemon_PopeLv15Lemon_Pope

I totally get it, not Every novel needs a harem but if you want to write a non harem why develop so much love interest who love him. At the end of it most of us will lose :(

Salmon_El_Solomon:This question is just out of curiosity, why make so many love affairs if it is a non-harem novel? There's Amanda (her childhood friend), the younger sister, a crazy woman who created a cult, the goddess, the 3 girls who were beta players and Luna, the girl with the disease...
Lyriker
LyrikerLv14Lyriker

no harem for my precious cinnamon roll Isaac

Thetickingtime
ThetickingtimeLv2Thetickingtime

You are familiar have I seen you somewhere...I can't seem to remember..anyway the Novel's is quite different from other online gaming novels that all I have to say

Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

Yeah thats my opinion as well. I usually prefer harems but i dont mind single loves. My problem with single lovers is that usually Authors still introduce tons of likable female characters that we would like to see with the MC. Now this isnt a problem if the interactions are distant and they dont fall for him. But making all the female characters like him and then telling your readers no harem is like a gut in the punch. What was the point of building them all up then? He could have just focus on the main FL and left them all as background characters.

Lemon_Pope:I totally get it, not Every novel needs a harem but if you want to write a non harem why develop so much love interest who love him. At the end of it most of us will lose :(
Aprentice
AprenticeLv14Aprentice

HaneKun
HaneKunLv12HaneKun

Näin

ExpiredRice
ExpiredRiceLv13ExpiredRice

I like how mc look tho. But I wish you could put a disclaime where it says that the mc is hiding his true identity.

SuvieDuvieDoo
SuvieDuvieDooLv11SuvieDuvieDoo

get an editor to fix grammatical errors mate.. you have a few books already that you have posted. Surely enough, even basic grammatical errors should be fixed since you already have much experience.

Geminis_Mata
Geminis_MataLv2Geminis_Mata

<3

HyeChoii
HyeChoiiLv10HyeChoii

i like the idea of a uniqe look

huoldz
huoldzLv1huoldz

keep up the good work, I wish to reduce the frequency of displaying the personal status or to show only the status that has changed.