Plz tell me what i need to work on any feed back will be nice so i can make money for my sick grandma thank you for anyone reading my story its good to know someone is reading my story's
chapter 5 is good but the problom is you have to put a lil more action im not going to lie so yeah im not going to wais my time on a book that aint have much action
its a good book i will not lie but im litterly using somuch passes so idk i would give it a 8 still im not a hater so ill give it a 5 but still goood work on it