Review Detail of HANA_4345 in Young Master Adrian Of Winford

Item: Young Master Adrian Of Winford
Rating: 5

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HANA_4345Lv32yrHANA_4345

Good grammar. Good character design. For the time being I don't think that you could call Adelaide an anti-hero (for now she looks more like the victim, maybe I'm wrong though). There's a good pacing for the story and it's a page turner. Great job author![img=recommend]

Young Master Adrian Of Winford

LucienNg

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HANA_4345Lv3HANA_4345

She really do have all the reasons to burn those people alive! Not one ounce of remorse.

LucienNg:Yes, she’s more of a victim atm, since I need to build her a power base (cuz she’s lazy and would never go on those training camps). Thank you so much for the review, though. 😊

2yr

LucienNgAuthorLucienNg

Yes, she’s more of a victim atm, since I need to build her a power base (cuz she’s lazy and would never go on those training camps). Thank you so much for the review, though. 😊

2yr