Review Detail of Greedy_ in The rise of the pervert primordial

Item: The rise of the pervert primordial
Rating: 2.6

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Greedy_Lv31yrGreedy_

interesting story... but to put it short it's a story written bye someone who probably who had never been in relationship... well not bad if your heart can support the cringness of the dialogue

The rise of the pervert primordial

Barion_Trident

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Tartiris_Lv3Tartiris_

This dude is a clown

1yr

Barion_TridentAuthorBarion_Trident

Lol, I have had a girlfriend before, the early chaps were a bit cringy because I was too noob as an author (later I lowered down the cheesiness XD)

1yr

InSCLv13InSC

Seriously bro??? This type of relationship romance cringe give spice to our bland world of normal romance relationship. If you are telling me about the cringe story outside of the romance aspect. I will 100% agree. But for romance? It's totally fine.

1yr