Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey

This is a great story up to around chapter 200 then it takes a left turn and becomes some drama filled, emotional journey that falls very flat. a giant tourney arc, and the obvious events of the SS Anne. He makes some real dumb and emotional actions at that point. Story is definitely a good read until all this so id tell anyone to enjoy this story as long as they knew what they were headed into. I was a pa tre on member but his MCs have a fundamental element missing, stopping his writing from truly being decent stories.