Lovely idea and premise .Translation could use some work in regards to grammer But please add the tag "system" Some people like myself like to steer clear of systems
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LIKEpirvu_mircea:I always find it funny when people who make more grammatical errors in one sentence than others would make in a book complain about "grammar" . "Grammar" seems to be the top critique of the new age .
bruh, it's novel. grammar/writing is top priority. no one will know about plot or mc if the grammar alone already gatekeep them from reading further
pirvu_mircea:I always find it funny when people who make more grammatical errors in one sentence than others would make in a book complain about "grammar" . "Grammar" seems to be the top critique of the new age .