I'm confused. Magic this, demonic power that, shapeshifting, manipulation , Whatever. This is Dragon Ball , why is the MC(author) ignoring Ki and martial arts ?

Why do authors never respond to comments when the ideas they're trying to push forward are clearly trash and there's so many comments saying it's trash. Can we get a REASON why we need fan-on brainwash in this story ? It feels cheap . Disgusting . And I don't think there's a reason for it .

I'd have preffered an emotionless system like in most of these novels. The MC is disgusting and he takes too many liberties.

I dislike the MC greatly so far. He doesn't want to integrate , interact or breathe the same air as anyone else with the stated reason he's a "grown-up". What nonsense. Also, I read in synopsys that it's a unique novel but then he wants to: abuse the room of requirment(like all other FF), doesn't like mind-reading(like all other FF), keeps vital info secret for weird reasons °doesn't have a fallback plan°(like all other FF), despises wands and wants to learn wandless(like most other FF), has knowledge of a bunch of "studies" why everyone else does stupid things(like a lot of othet FF), he's "rational" °makes a bunch of selfish plans°(like most other FF). Overall, a lie and an unlikable MC. dropped

I'm dropping here, that "wormhole" ability he got through plot armor is completely tasteless and it damaged the integrity of the story. Paired up with previous complaints I've had about the MC's plot-derived power-ups like randomly changing your race.. yeah, goodbye .

The cake is a lie . If you've come here expecting a MC that works for his abilities ( as I did and I was pretty excited to read this story) , that's too bad. The MC starts with a system and it boots and gives him a bunch of knowledge and a Devil Fruit, that's still OK . Then, the MC is kidnapped???? in the second chapter randomly and his parents left him a super soldier serum, he proceeds to drink it in the 2nd or 3rd chapter ... . What I was expecting was the MC waking up with the quake-quake fruit next to him, but what I got was a MC getting info downloaded in his brain followed by a super soldier serum in the second chapter.. so much "work" haha. DROPPED 3rd chapter.

Ah, I thought it's going to be a somewhat nice story. But it seems ,like 98% of Chinese trash, this one also suffers from either "brainwash issues" , laws issues" , "immortality issued", "golden finger issues".

This whole "separating" identities just shows the author knows it's completely stupid to go murderhobo, especially killing incapacitated, defenseless people. But like all the other idiots out there, they have the opinion that if you just SNAP the Joker's neck, the world will be a better place. What society needs is a beacon of safety, not a serial killer with unique ideas. What a letdown, a good fic ruined by stupidity.

Ethical lines only matter in 1 chapter for the author to make drama randomly. A few chapters down the line he'll do whatever again because author has no plan and no boundaries , don't take it to heart, it's a 3-rd rate novel at best.

The most completely disgusting part is not the plot hole situation, but he gave his father superpowers withlut consent. What "close your eyes", he's totally treating them like toys.

Ah, this feels like the author is trying extremely hard to make a "ruthless MC" for the webnovel lowlives who can't read anything if it's not in the style of "you look at me ,I beat you up ; you swear at me, I kill your entire family". Complete trash , I'm dropping .

This might be the most condescending reply to this site's average intellectual user I've ever seen "Long story short. No stompy, stompy without worky worky." . Really taking 'talking the same language' to 11. It's particularly funny if you read the entire paragraph that was well thought out and grammatically correct and realize 80% of the people skipped it and read the "TL;DR".

Not rituals again . The last FF I read, the MC gave himself feline eyes in his 3rd year for night vision using rituals, then proceeded to do more rituals to boost his "magic reserves". The pre-previous FF I read , also had some rituals. Basically, rituals are average author's way of bulldozing through powerscale and create the invincible 15-year-old magical prodigy that can fight 5 Voldemorts at the same time .

Oh god , the first class is already a Goblin Rebellion ?

What do you mean by "until he's safe" ? Because , from what I know , the world gets progressively more dangerous the more years into the HP books it goes. If he's acting like a lunatic on coke thinking about how to backstab people at the start of book one, we'll never reach the point where he'll be "safe" till the end of the fanfiction . The start of book one is literally sunshines and magic and there are only 2 mildly dangerous events with predefined locations in the entire school year. If you're not in that bathroom during Halloween and you're not entering the forbidden room on floor 3 at the end of the school year, there's literally no danger .

I hope it's not a "low-key" MC hiding his wood release until he's invincible or some other nonsense like 98.34% of fanfics .

Who is Mark ? He is a researcher at an observatory studying Mars samples . Where is he ? Looks like New York, do you want a postal code ? He just came out of a colorful hole in reality . Such negativity halfway down the first chapter tsk .

The premise of this novel is interesting , but unfortunately, it's plagued by disgusting cliches. He's poor, his father died because they're poor, his mother had a stroke , the guilds he joins betray him , the women he's interested in only use him for benefits, he has an undying friend who he will help unwaveringly , his other friends distance and betray him , he's swearing up and down that he will "repay" all the wrongdoing that haven't happened yet , the rich are ostracized and emotionless, the world is run by benefits and backstabbing .There's a FL who's rich and plays the game to prove XX to herself and the MC has mentioned it like 5 times already. At least there's no little sister to take care of ? BLEH ! I only want to read the MMORPG , I don't need all these "conflicts" from MCs TRAGIC FUTURE LIFE .I really, don't care one whit. Just, finish it and let me read the MMORPG part. Ugh, almost dropping already .

Did an AI write this comment ? It's really weird because the english looks almost decent until you reach some words that are written like they're spoken. Like, an AI got trained english with audio and went off from there. Whereas you would write believe and say biliv , this "person" writes and says biliv. Or where you'd write With but say whith , this person will both writes and reads whith . It's so weird.

Riight , of course the so-called system aka DEUS EX MACHINA is not only going to give him insights into how to create world-altering technology, but also hand in raw power to make him a universe-level godking in 20 chapters. Do these authors lack imagination or are all these novels made by AI ? It was great to read about a scientist developing stuff in One Piece, but now we're back to the cliche where he'll beat everyone with completely out of the hat powers that noone expects because they're undeserved. Way to ruin my enjoyment with this stupid development. DROPPED