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Review Detail of DonnutHermit in High Human in Crossed Worlds - A HP x DxD Fic

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DonnutHermit
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I'm being shameless here and giving my own story a review. At least it is not a 5 stars one because I know where it can get better. 4 stars in writing bcs english is not my main laguage, so I still strugle with the vocabulary 5 stars in stability bcs I pretend to realease one chapter per day, at 12h in the webnovel time 5 stars in development bcs I know where I'm going with the story and have a 'script' to get there 4 stars in character because I'm not very good at describing them 5 stars in world bcs is a mix between the sandboxes created by JKRowling and Ichiei Ishibumi, and their worlds are amazing

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High Human in Crossed Worlds - A HP x DxD Fic

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deedlitt
deedlittLv15deedlitt

do you ever intend to finish this novel I miss your unique vision of these worlds

DartUpdates
DartUpdatesLv14DartUpdates

Harem or solo pair or no strings attached

Legendary_Gear5
Legendary_Gear5Lv13Legendary_Gear5

Has a harem tag dude

DartUpdates:Harem or solo pair or no strings attached
CanRead
CanReadLv2CanRead

look at the tags... it's not that hard.

DartUpdates:Harem or solo pair or no strings attached
Vitrialia_Amermes
Vitrialia_AmermesLv3Vitrialia_Amermes

he blind after all just ignore people like that , their brain in knee after all

CanRead:look at the tags... it's not that hard.
Bakkoy
BakkoyLv4Bakkoy

Inside the tag is weak to strong, is he still weak after his journey? I mean he's 1000 years old right? Or am I wrong?

ViaSky
ViaSkyLv2ViaSky

I mean his bones are probably frail after a thousand years not to mention his back, give him a break bro.

Bakkoy:Inside the tag is weak to strong, is he still weak after his journey? I mean he's 1000 years old right? Or am I wrong?
Bakkoy
BakkoyLv4Bakkoy

Pfft. Makes sense

ViaSky:I mean his bones are probably frail after a thousand years not to mention his back, give him a break bro.
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Tylor_Roney
Tylor_RoneyLv14Tylor_Roney

what is dxd not that anime with no plot just fan service I hope

Apathy_Reads
Apathy_ReadsLv4Apathy_Reads

Tylor_Roney:what is dxd not that anime with no plot just fan service I hope
JoelLude
JoelLudeLv13JoelLude

You going to continue bro? I'd really hate for this book to be dropped like so many other good fanfics.

romeotango148
romeotango148Lv14romeotango148

Upgrade it to 5 stars. Youre among the handful of authors i’ve had the pleasure to read that has such a rock steady chapter release schedule. Really appreciate your hard work and if you’ve got a next story youre thinking of writing (as long as its not Naruto related) odds are ill library it by default based on this one

BlkRabbit
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I just wanna ask, is the 1000 years before canon part formatted like present timeline, then goes back to 1000 years after the arc is over. Or is it gonna a present/past back and forth...?

Ttsfih
TtsfihLv4Ttsfih

hi, could u spoiler me who is in mc h.a.r.e.m to latest chapter? I would like to know before i will start reading.

DarkMoonRaven
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author is this story going to continue and if so when ?

deedlitt
deedlittLv15deedlitt

wish you could come back and continue with your story its currently the best Hp fan fiction on the site

Arco
ArcoLv4Arco

author come back

Shimmering_Dark
Shimmering_DarkLv15Shimmering_Dark

When are you coming back?

Ambrose_Allen
Ambrose_AllenLv15Ambrose_Allen

man i hoped we could see from where he started not just flashbacks :/

Shimmering_Dark
Shimmering_DarkLv15Shimmering_Dark

Come back to us!

Raj_Vatsal
Raj_VatsalLv4Raj_Vatsal

why dropped the book? ?