author there is r 18 tag but there is no describing scene or the s#x skip, I hope you can fix this, I know overdoing is bad, here is solution to this every time he does the thing you describ it when new women .... , from time to time with previous women , balance everything, I am not writer, so I don't know good pace etc, overall this My recommendation. (I am at chapter 20) I don't know if you changed it.
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