wdymn, doesn't make sense to me. drops his own blood then drinks it, is flowing ing his veins ???? doesn't make immune to it why does he need to drink it

out of 100 how much u rate it? and Is worth reading , clich scenarios ???? is original or copy pasted (similar to mtl clich ) 🤣

what the f author, he not she or her change it

it's technically copy paste but different names and etc, only background is different, I hope to see it goes to different direction , since you said your inspired by ..... but you can't copy paste all the time, I could understand the beginning etc.

author, your writing confusing as f, I can't understand your writing at all, well you could understand after wrecking your brain too much but ain't worth it. especially fighting scene and conversation as previous comments the concept it very good

I disagree with you, cultivation level keeps changing

I hate relationships between mc and his wife and family etc

can someone explain? I would appreciate it

mc flesh 😁 probably

there is Improvement , good job author 👏

she .

. he not she

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from now on I will just help you edit or put ( . ) to indicate sentence doesn't make sense

can say no

author, I am seriously getting annoyed, atleast you use the of name characters and mc correctly, I could ignore, she or he and grammars but changing name or misplacing them is major turn off for me. I know i am being unreasonable maybe , I could say you are better than me when writing story etc but I could differenate between he or she. maybe you have tired or something. I hope you can do minor editing. and thank for your hardwork.

he watch , not she unless she is girl

ahem author, he not she. it ruins the immersion and thx if you changed

author there is r 18 tag but there is no describing scene or the s#x skip, I hope you can fix this, I know overdoing is bad, here is solution to this every time he does the thing you describ it when new women .... , from time to time with previous women , balance everything, I am not writer, so I don't know good pace etc, overall this My recommendation. (I am at chapter 20) I don't know if you changed it.

worth reading, I recommend it 👌 10/10. needs more chapter for review(describing the novel in detail 😁) hdhdhdsjsjsjsjdjdjdjdjdjjdjddjdjdjd