Review Detail of Ashton_A in Farming Inside The Dungeon (The legend of farm-style dungeon)
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I do love dungeon master novels and am happy you chose the genre that said either people are stupid or reading the wrong novel cause this doesnt even deserve 1 star. Mc is naive, extremely stupid to the point its cringe, and a massive hypocrite. Could barely go past chapter 3. 1. How has he never injured himself in the cave hes visited for years. 2. His love for an orphanage that took him in because its the literal job of the orphanage is cringe and to the point of fanatic that its unrealistic, sure maybe they were super nice but its their job. ok sure this isnt that bad but its annoying and cringe as heck to see him beg for some money and cry like a baby cause he apparently "needs to support his orphanage" which is literally government funded and he should be paying for food and rent which is a much better excuse cause thats not how a normal person would react or pay their debt its stupid. 3. Grammar is eh 4. Mc is hypocrite, kills wolfs, sees wolf leader has kid, so kills their enemies to protect wolf leader. why? because he has a kid?!?! One, the wolf leader and you were enemies until the second you saw they had a kid and the enemies you kill have kids also you oaf and you have no relation to either party, completely forced by author. 5. I hate harems, but i wont let that affect my review because thats a category not a writing flaw. However why do you people need to ruin novels with dungeon masters and recruiting so much, if you want a harem thats fine, but not almost every single monster recruited needs to be a girl for the sake of harem, throw some guys in that arent antagonists or extras. For those who love harems, thats your choice but i will say its better to not put a harem in a novel as a majority of the webnovel readerbase hates anything harem related and most of those who read harems still read books without harems so if you want more readers dont do harem or little sisters. Little sisters makes 90% of readers drop a novel just seeing any words that state mc has a little sister those that stay just hope she dies so they can read in peace. 6. theres more but im too lazy.
Farming Inside The Dungeon (The legend of farm-style dungeon)
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I have to comment on your second point. Just because a person is paid to do something doesn't mean they will enjoy doing it or care about the thing that they have to do. An orphanage that is able to treat children with care is more likely to be out of the norm, since an orphanage's job is to house children until they become adults or are adopted, meaning that children can come and go resulting in the workers not wanting to foster relationships on something that will end up meaningless in the end. Not to mention the common troupe of bad orphanages and their director who either sells kids or embezzles the money for the kids. Now I won't say that the common troupe is more common in real life, but it certain has and can happen. I would say that the MC's love for the orphanage is completely within the realm of possibility. I mean wouldn't you feel grateful to a friend who has treated you like family during your worst of times? Or how about a doctor who saved your life? How about an adoptive family would took you in, gave you a happy home and life? The way I see it, the MC's love for the orphanage could stem from how he was treated like family while he was a resident, or could just be how the people their are basically his family, and the orphanage just happens to be the place where they reside. Don't get me wrong, I dislike the story, more due to the MC having the shonen persona of hero would is willing to risk life, but also is super weak willed in front of women. Also the jokes are quite cringe.
