Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Diablo in Highschool DxD
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I couldn't get passed the 4th chapter. He makes stupid decisions during his wishes then acts shocked that there are negative consequences. lol asked to be the only one left in his house then confused to find out they've all been killed by enemies of the house, being the direct cause of his houses downfall. decides he wants a pureblood status rank family name but shocked when it changes the history and plot. I can't make that up. I think there is a good story here but its hard getting past the cliche nature of such an origin. Good luck with your story
Diablo in Highschool DxD
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Nah, you have to understand that when he came here, he was thinking that it would be some ordinary reincarnation. He didn't expect them all to be slaughtered, I mean he knew they would be dead one way or another but he didn't expect an active hand involved in all that, with clans actually targeting his. Even though it is kinda his fault, if you remember, he feels guilty as well, not really 'shocked' per se And for the slight canon changed, he was referring to the other fanfics he had read, where they also had different clans but the plot turned out to be the same. You and I both know that there are lots of fanfics like that. But yea, I do guess it's all a bit cliche. Still, thank you for reading
What? All the other reboots for this story? This is the first reboot of the story, my first rewrite. Unless you're saying that you read the previous version
The_Arkhon:don't know if I should read this, I've read all the other reboots for this story and they all got dropped so dono
midgetydeath:You sound kinda dumb. There's no reason for him to assume wanting to be the only one left of his house would actively kill anyone and no reason to believe wanting to be part of an important family would change history instead of just, y'know being born into an important family.
midgetydeath:You sound kinda dumb. There's no reason for him to assume wanting to be the only one left of his house would actively kill anyone and no reason to believe wanting to be part of an important family would change history instead of just, y'know being born into an important family.