hahaha shoot true. this MC is too nice! background and updating speed get a 2!!!! thats a justified review cuz its our opinion. hahaha

wrong

what story is a 5 to you? haha better be f*cking perfect or you're over critical over your own preferences and doesn't actually reflect the true quality of a story. and if you don't give any story a 5 thats a whole other physiological issue you need figured out.

lol absolved? he's not talking about the criticism, thats not what he said. there is a standard for fanfics and a standard for real stories. its about the rating. if this is a 3.5 then there shouldn't be anything higher than a 4.5 on here. but these are fanfics and id your judgment is that critical over these stories then your life is a f*cking mess, like yours probably is. lol you're too stupid to see that. lol not his fault!

You definitely have something wrong with you! you don't understand sarcasm at all, you can't be all right in the head if you haven't picked up on it still. His response was basically laughing in your face because you've been wrong the whole time and seeing you struggle to respond is hilarious. ya def go no good friends or family if you haven't understood sarcasm, stunted growth from the lack of em

agreed

Truth! but you probably just triggered the whole fanfic community. haha

Agreed!

ya not to mention he loves saying "It ain't my problem" while pointing out other peoples problems! lol every cliche mc loves doing that to keep the depressed angry readers happy, it can be hard to swallow

give up at this point

He needs to go back to school hahaha

you sound dumb

such a boring response. lol people who hate protagonists like this are the vegans of the fanfic community. crybabies, can't enjoy a story because hes too good, doesn't mean the story isn't entertaining and has quality. lol I get it you love slobbering on the morally neutral, freedom loving, benefits needing MC's d*ck. those kinda stories can be entertaining as well but your biased is hilarious and narrow minded. and you sound like a dumb*ass young master from those xanxias stories we all hate.

spot on but im only a few chapters in

thanks for the heads up, im out

5 out of 5 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the story is decent but you really don't know what kind of MC you are dealing with. hes made good choices, stupid ones, and questionable ones. he seems to be a bit of a slave to the system as well sometimes and it reflects in the choices he makes. I feel like he's headed toward the cliche morally ambiguous MC that's been extra popular on this app. problem is a story without a framework and without boundaries usually starts losing its steam after losing its mystery. Story is predictably unpredictable, usually by adding a twist at the end up chapters by leaving readers out of the MCs thought process when he makes certain choices earlier in the story. seems like a cheap writing trick but just writing is impressive in its own right. Story is still pretty new so my review might change later. Story is overall pretty good and id suggest giving it a read before judging it.

his mom probably hates his guts hahaha