Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

The story is well written. I don't want to be harsh to the author but there has to be an edit to be made, specifically on grammar and punctuations. I don't want to sound like a feeler here as I am worst than the author. But storywise, this is lit and heartwarming. Wholesome to read in the opening and the story flows well. Characters are also carefully crafted and her creations were splendid! Anyone who reads this review has to read this great artwork. This is a gem to be exact.