Review Detail of DuchessKolslaw in Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Item: Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
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DuchessKolslawLv21yrDuchessKolslaw

Lily cucking her husband and not caring about him. She already chose Snape when she told James he can leave through the door if he doesn't want a polygamous relationship. James should just ask for a divorce. The fact the author let the readers chose her Harem route was a huge mistake. The author wrote it all out in a poor scenario also. Just ruined the novel for me.

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

LazySageDao

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GG_SlayerLv4GG_Slayer

the mc having an harem is ok but a side character having one with 2 people is not okay

1yr

DuchessKolslawLv2DuchessKolslaw

The difference is James is not okay with being in a Harem.

GG_Slayer:the mc having an harem is ok but a side character having one with 2 people is not okay

1yr

GG_SlayerLv4GG_Slayer

He should leave then

DuchessKolslaw:The difference is James is not okay with being in a Harem.

1yr

SrCuervoLv4SrCuervo

Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.

1yr

The_man_The_mythLv4The_man_The_myth

SrCuervo:Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.

8mth

darangelortizLv14darangelortiz

The issue with that is that like in real life you would have that conversation early in the relationship not after you are married and with kids because that would be an absolutely horrid thing to do to your partner or have done to you if the book can’ t use common sense and logic then it is objectively a bad book

GG_Slayer:the mc having an harem is ok but a side character having one with 2 people is not okay

8mth

GG_SlayerLv4GG_Slayer

People can have a change of mind 💀💀💀💀and why bring the kids here they're adults by now 💀💀💀

darangelortiz:The issue with that is that like in real life you would have that conversation early in the relationship not after you are married and with kids because that would be an absolutely horrid thing to do to your partner or have done to you if the book can’ t use common sense and logic then it is objectively a bad book

7mth

Santy_MelayLv1Santy_Melay

Que trama más innecesaria, hubiera traído a la vida a los dos, Lily podría haber pedido que revivieran a James, pero no, que repugnante, detesto la infidelidad, porque técnicamente todavía estaban casados.

7mth

DuchessKolslawLv2DuchessKolslaw

Uhh English?

Santy_Melay:Que trama más innecesaria, hubiera traído a la vida a los dos, Lily podría haber pedido que revivieran a James, pero no, que repugnante, detesto la infidelidad, porque técnicamente todavía estaban casados.

7mth

khazarLv4khazar

in real life your husband wouldn't be dead for a century a come back in middle of you relationship.

darangelortiz:The issue with that is that like in real life you would have that conversation early in the relationship not after you are married and with kids because that would be an absolutely horrid thing to do to your partner or have done to you if the book can’ t use common sense and logic then it is objectively a bad book

2mth

DarkFlame69Lv3DarkFlame69

Good point

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