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Review Detail of Slothiticus in Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

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Slothiticus
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The main character exhibits traits that are all in line with a psychopath which only seems cool but quickly becomes uncomfortable to read if you have a conscious and don't need therapy for aforementioned mental condition. This is one of those story's where attractive women seem to exist for the sole purpose of being madly in love with the mc for no reason, so if that's your thing great but like I said before therapy is an option. This story is not the worst but in terms but if your looking for good story and characters there are better options and if you are looking for a great HP fan fiction because you like source material then this story basically guts what it want while ignoring what it wants to Frankenstein some simbalence of a story rogether.

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Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

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David_Drake
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Also the nonsensical power levels later on are BS. It comes to a point where the MC can literally wipe universes out and there is still enemies that are way stronger than him. Seriously it hasn't been a thousand years and through just meditation and magically incorporating tech in time skips he's still is weak in the grand scheme of things. Conservation of Energy means little where finite resources will in turn make infinite mana

SrCuervo
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Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.