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WoofWoof
WoofWoofLv62yrWoofWoof

writing would be average but author likes to fool around. The grammar has many faults, wrong prepositions, common mistakes, typos, use random word when he is mind draws a blank to replace, using copy&paste The author did not bother to explain many things, unused skill books, idle system has army building purpose, inefficient system, does not have system store to sell surplus items, confusion. i could name many more things. This gets worse as it progresses

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My Idle Gaming System

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DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

absolutely, and his excessive use of "RUMBLE" Like is he trying to intensify the plot line or is he just a massive JoJo fan