Review Detail of Ashborn0 in The Author's POV
Review detail
Well this isn't a review but a list of complaints, that I have for this novel from Writer sama. First Thing First, I'm not shitting on it, there are many things I liked and Many I disliked. For example, the idea of novel is very unique this isn't you average Demon king story.. The author here is the main protagonist who got reincarnated in his own novel. That's what the plot said but you know what? Even after Being reincarnated and becoming the new protagonist he still wanna be low-key. I don't hate this idea, but after sometime writer seems to forget about the plot as he(author) attract with other protagonists even if he doesn't want to. I don't know, but the only thing after reading 130+ chapters of your novel I realized is that you don't seem to care about your Main MC, all I see throughout the story was Novel MC getting huge stuff without even doing anything. Should have made him the real protagonist.... Not even a single lucky encounter in the Hidden Dungeon arc.... Main MC is nerfed. Mann I mean look at him 0 luck, 1+ charm, No high Rank, No Decent system (yes, decent), No chicks.... All you'll see throughout the story is MC using his brain and a High-Ranked Sword technique which I think is the only decent skill MC has. System is totally non-existent. I ain't sure but I guess I missed some info dump but I have seen a system similar to his from one of the povs of Jin. I think it's just an interference that everyone has. Interactions between the main MC and the novel MC was a huge turn off for me. It's like writer is forcing them to develop companionship lmao why bother making a character who don't even has any importance, should have just followed the adventure of novel mc. Mc will keep saying ‘this didn't happen in the novel’ like wow if you know you're affecting the main plot then shouldn't you improve yourself quickly and help others, by using some cheats? But no he'll still not interfere with other protagonists. At the end, the most important thing I hated was weaklessness of Main MC... Sigh tbh I would have liked him more if he had a cheat ability but Sadly My guy's nerfed so hard that he doesn't even know a demon is stalking him right now😞 Should have make the other mc, main mc cuz he's better Also about the love interests, I'm kinda confused. Isn't Emma a love interest of Novel MC? And other girls too? Are planning to make them fall in love with the main mc...? I'll stick to the novel for more 50/60+ chapters if Main mc didn't get any fortuneous/lucy encounter I'll drop it sighh... And please do tell if this harem or not? I'm not a Harem-Guy but seeing the great personalities of female protagonists you are making, I love for A small 4/5 Harem.
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Entrail_JI
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Man this isn't how you state facts, you are telling me to read some other Chinese novels like wow isn't this equivalent to Getting triggered? I'm here on your novel asking you to make mc a lil bit stronger and you.... sigh forget it i understand this is your novel so good luck i was just stating facts
Entrail_JI:Im not triggerred Im just stating facts Ur asking me to make the author MC Into a typical chinese MC that only thinks with his part below and is OP To the extreme with no ounce if realism I clamly rebutted all of ur points and told you that this isnt that type of novel. Did i swear at you? Did i insult you? No So no, i was not triggered.
After reading this only thing i can say to you is drop it. Simply put, this is not an OP MC story Author MC is not going to surpass novel MC in 4 months. Just no. Also novel MC has a system. Thats it. No one else have it. Also u call a D rank core and E rank artifacts nothing? (Hidden dung) Moreober, the whole point of that arc was for holding his end of the deal when going to immorra Morover yes he doesnt know he is being stalked by a demon, but did u forget novel MC was near, therefore both couldnt tell However evn though he didnt know he was being stalked he managed to infer the identity of who it was. If ur looking for a story where MC is a walking plot armor and is super strong please go to another novel. Simply put this aint it. Please go read some chinese cultivation novles where u get an MC that gets cheats everywhere has chicks everywhere and studf like that. This is not that type of novel.
then why bother making a character like that where he can't even surpass the other mc, should have just followed the main plotline so ironic and i didn't mean to offend you, and you yourself said that I'll accept any complaints and now that I'm actually telling you what's wrong with your novel.. yer getting triggered bruh
Entrail_JI:After reading this only thing i can say to you is drop it. Simply put, this is not an OP MC story Author MC is not going to surpass novel MC in 4 months. Just no. Also novel MC has a system. Thats it. No one else have it. Also u call a D rank core and E rank artifacts nothing? (Hidden dung) Moreober, the whole point of that arc was for holding his end of the deal when going to immorra Morover yes he doesnt know he is being stalked by a demon, but did u forget novel MC was near, therefore both couldnt tell However evn though he didnt know he was being stalked he managed to infer the identity of who it was. If ur looking for a story where MC is a walking plot armor and is super strong please go to another novel. Simply put this aint it. Please go read some chinese cultivation novles where u get an MC that gets cheats everywhere has chicks everywhere and studf like that. This is not that type of novel.
Im not triggerred Im just stating facts Ur asking me to make the author MC Into a typical chinese MC that only thinks with his part below and is OP To the extreme with no ounce if realism I clamly rebutted all of ur points and told you that this isnt that type of novel. Did i swear at you? Did i insult you? No So no, i was not triggered.
Ashborn0:then why bother making a character like that where he can't even surpass the other mc, should have just followed the main plotline so ironic and i didn't mean to offend you, and you yourself said that I'll accept any complaints and now that I'm actually telling you what's wrong with your novel.. yer getting triggered bruh
No, the chinese cultivation thing is not a fact but a suggestion since you seem to like generic MC that relies on systems and has women by his side all the time. Regarding the facts, it was me calmly pointing out at some of your info regarding hidden dungeon and system. Author MC does not have a system. Also, don't get offended, but please be realistic. How do you expect someone who just got into his own novel to surpass the novel MC that has a system, plot armor, and has been in the world for 16 years of his life in just 4 months? He is already E rank, which should just be enough to indicate on how ridiculous this is. Had I been another author I would've just called you an idiot and be done with it. However I didn't. I actually took my time to properly tell you why I didn't do so, and even suggested you to read Chinese novels as that is what you seem to like Generic MC's with plot armor everywhere and chicks around them all the time with no realism. That's what you asked of me. And I told you, to drop it because that's never going to happen. Thank you for reading.
Ashborn0:Man this isn't how you state facts, you are telling me to read some other Chinese novels like wow isn't this equivalent to Getting triggered? I'm here on your novel asking you to make mc a lil bit stronger and you.... sigh forget it i understand this is your novel so good luck i was just stating facts
Well I do like some Chinese Cultivation novel I'm not a fan of them that's the reason why I'm reading originals right now and I guess you didn't get my ‘harem line’ comment[img=recommend]
Entrail_JI:No, the chinese cultivation thing is not a fact but a suggestion since you seem to like generic MC that relies on systems and has women by his side all the time. Regarding the facts, it was me calmly pointing out at some of your info regarding hidden dungeon and system. Author MC does not have a system. Also, don't get offended, but please be realistic. How do you expect someone who just got into his own novel to surpass the novel MC that has a system, plot armor, and has been in the world for 16 years of his life in just 4 months? He is already E rank, which should just be enough to indicate on how ridiculous this is. Had I been another author I would've just called you an idiot and be done with it. However I didn't. I actually took my time to properly tell you why I didn't do so, and even suggested you to read Chinese novels as that is what you seem to like Generic MC's with plot armor everywhere and chicks around them all the time with no realism. That's what you asked of me. And I told you, to drop it because that's never going to happen. Thank you for reading.
A little spoiler down below and I don't know how to put the spoiler tag bruh aren't u a bit too much he already has a one shot skill which is OP and don't forget that our MC's weakness is his emotions and he even got rid of that by his skill ( which may have been his true self hidden inside him ) and he is adjusting to the world at the moment if he started to do something like the Kevin I am pretty sure his family could have gotten killed before he met them and the fact that there are villains even in the campus makes it even more dangerous and as for a cheat like thing he can see 10 mins into the future (although not his) and he cannot even reveal his one shot skill in public before he gets stronger and I think he would not be able to even fight much in the future as he is publicly D graded so he will likely take on a commanding role in the MC team . and as per your requirement from above I would suggest cultivation chat group which u may have already read
This is a matter of preference. You like systems and fast OP main charcacters. Did you even point out any Illogical plots or so? No, its just your preferencr. The author chose to make interactions between the author mc and the novel mc and U find that refreshing, but you don’t. Don’t expect to like everything as we have different preferences. You sound like you are complaining why this story has this kind of plot, honestly if the author was easily swayed by dorks like you who don’t even criticize properly this book would be trash. thank you for reading
DaoistM9crzI:This is a matter of preference. You like systems and fast OP main charcacters. Did you even point out any Illogical plots or so? No, its just your preferencr. The author chose to make interactions between the author mc and the novel mc and U find that refreshing, but you don’t. Don’t expect to like everything as we have different preferences. You sound like you are complaining why this story has this kind of plot, honestly if the author was easily swayed by dorks like you who don’t even criticize properly this book would be trash. thank you for reading