Review Detail of Romanna_abdo in The Tales Of Divine Sun Dragon

i have to say i like the story itself but author you are focusing too much on filling chapters an entire just descriping the characters after about 2 to 5 chpaters i amnot saying it is a bad thing but too many times is annoying as of now i read about 70 chapters that could be written in 50 or less even on good way what's more almost every chapter when you make a change on the scene or switching between two scene you must start as an unknown figure then identifies it man that's honostly too much that's making it annoying too much annoying . the grammers i rarely see a section with a good grammer almost every chapter is written badly pls revise them and thanks