Review Detail of ShuYme in Star Wars: Skywalker

Its a good story, the grammar is good. The only problem i have with It is that everything ends well for the MC there is no suspense ot anything its like the universe bends over backwards to accomodate the frankly ridiculous stuff the MC achieved even as a child. Most characters just agree with the mc regardless of the absurdity of his claimS for example negotiating with The nightsisters as a child and getting them to agree in like 4 sentences It just reeks of lazy writing. Very unrealistic even if the MC is the «chosen one». MC is a classic gary sue who masters everything almost instantly which isnt that fun to read about I recommend it if u just want to kill some time. If you want something deeper or compelling then this isnt for you