Jesus adopting a woman who already has a father, especially weird since he «adopted» her when meeting her for the first time, not visiting or contacting her for 2 years, this is so forced and kinda ruins the mc for me

Wtf? Hitler fanfic???

Obvs dont have the AI write it, just copy paste the text and have it highlight or fix the typos

The plot hardly moves and the chapters are realeased at an unbearably slow pace, hopefully that changes

Stealth archer is the way to go

Its atleast more than some other fics Where the mc is an actual midget for the world like 160cm, hopefully he grows to like 2,80

The writing is soulless and convoluted, the paragraphs drag on and on endlesslesly while nothing happens plot wise. It is an absolute chore to read, the characters are devoid of personality and the mc is as two dimensional as they come. It also read like an AI story

Nothing has really happened so far, no plot progression at all, so its hella slow paced, writing is meh, but the author says english isnt his first language so that can be forgiven, updating stability is good, characters are bland, and the humor is pretty juvenile, hopefully that changes. World background hasnt rlly come into play yet so🤷‍♂️

Started good, quickly went downhill, mc lacks agency and the fic is just drama drama drama and nothing else. It is a chore to read

I never Get why pokemon fics seem to rush the journey, mc is 11 hes not gonna die anytime soon so why the rush, he could just accumulate powerful pokemon and try when he is older

I did read the rest of it aswell, while there were more interactions between characters it also felt very rushed and shallow, andfor the most part it still read allot like a report of events, rather than us being there «following» the events through the eyes of the mc, maybe thats What ur going for idk. ILl follow the story until the mc gets to kingslanding and i guess ill see if it changes anything

1 star because this is obvs written by a ChatGPT, and the author not mentioning it is wrong. Its not Even his work because he obvs didnt write it

It reads like a synopsis, no character interactions at all

Theres can’t be more than like 5 chapters left at lost, just finish it

The typos he can fix pretty easily with AI, idk bout the rest tho

Are you being deliberately obtuse? He has knowledge from the anime,the bounties have pictures, and dragon has a distinctive face tattoo, I.e he would be able to recognize dragons bounty poster

He has knowledge from the anime so he will know dragons face

The world bends over backwards to accomodate the mc, He is the worlds little special boy. Gary sue who masters everything instantly. It is mind numbingly boring to resd about

Did u drop this?