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Review Detail of Uace in Demon Of Ruin

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After just a few minutes, I was invested in the story. The story development is fast-paced, reasonable, and exciting because new scenes arise every few chapters, which keeps the story fresh. The MC is actually pretty smart, and there are many times when the story made me laugh out loud. The world background is a little sparse for the reader since the novel just started; however, I like the way the MC discovers things. This makes it so that the reader can discover the world with the MC, which is cool. The only thing that I have a pet peeve about is the slight, very small amount of excessive comma usage, which can jar the reading experience. But, as I said, they are very rare, and the author will improve. I really do enjoy reading the novel, so I hope whoever reads this also tries it out.

Demon Of Ruin

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Thanks for the first review on my book! I really appreciate it and it will greatly motivate me to write more. I hope I don’t disappoint.