so definitely space out more. like use two spaces or one i dont remember anymore after two sentences or full stops. Also, use commas and other punctuations instead of constantly using fullstops. good luck
i wonder if that dude is the protagonist of another book of yours? considering how they talk bout his unique ways, i find him a hard but very interesting character to write
maybe show how his awkwardness in social situations in the future to develope his character
Amun Ashraf was one of the very few people who were coincidentally named as the Gods they awakened to be. He was tall and had a dark complexion with short curly hair. He liked privacy and lacked common social skills.
By using the movements within the practice text, people became capable of storing what came to be known as sword breath into their bodies, allowing them to display great prowess as long as they wielded a sword, and before anyone knew it the world had already changed…
"{The Sage of the Crystal Mountain,}" Fray said seriously. "{It is an anecdote. Or, I believed it was a simple anecdote. It is about a Sage living on top of a mountain made of crystal. The Sage is told to be omniscient and omnipotent.}"