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Great novel, best one by easyread yet. You can clearly see how much better the author got through the experiences gained with his other novels. Honestly, I'd love it if this was turned into the primary story by the author even if I understand that the other stories need to be finished for their fans too. Thus definitely has a lot of potential as a gamelit / litrpg scifi novel tough.
The Aeternus Universe
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I appreciate the praise for The Aeternus Universe. It's the story that's benefited the most from The Ancients World. I hope people come to enjoy The Libertas Dive just as much, but that story is still very young and under development. I'm enjoying the process of writing for both The Aeternus Universe and The Libertas Dive. Hopefully, people can accept or ignore the stats at the end of every chapter on The Libertas Dive, but it's okay if they don't. You're a great reviewer, SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST. Most don't give respectful and accurate reviews. You do. I appreciate that you don't call me an idiot or worse. It disappoints me there aren't more readers like you.
I'm usually hated for my reviews because of those same reasons lol. I got Libertas in my library but shelved now I took time to remember the cover image. Shelved till its either finished or much further along for the mentioned reasons on the review and comments there. The Aeternus Universe is my favourite one yet tough. the potential for this story is definitely high. Afterall, I don't tend to get hyped easily and I think you got a great concept here with just the right distribution of building blocks to blow the other original novels in the 'Sci-fi' genre on wn away in due time. The only thing I can see that might hinder your fanbase is a slower release rate but that hardly matters by the time the novel is further along. Updates will always bring in new readers, and if you got your SEO sorted out with max. Use of tags, chapter titles, volumes and descriptions it's unlikely to be beat. The cover could use something more scifi and engaging tough... Try looking through Sci-fi images on artstation, I recommend either a half total of a character with blue and purple lights in a scifi theme looking into the camera or a total shot with a scifi looking character in a Sci-fi possibly abstract looking environment, with their backs to the camera and walking to something simple like a lit up primary shape such as a circle, rectangle or triangle aligned as if its a portal or something. Its a popular scene configuration in photoshop and 3d compositions with a scifi theme so you should find something that fits the spirit of things as well as holding a character that fits the sort theme that resonates with the mc's description. Another possible place to look is Pinte rest or DeviantArt. Either way, the cover is the primary way to get people to check out your book outside of the title and a fine tuned SEO for it. Its the whole, first impression thing. A good cover image sells the story as well as or even better than a thousand words. So yeah. Food for thought.
easyread:I appreciate the praise for The Aeternus Universe. It's the story that's benefited the most from The Ancients World. I hope people come to enjoy The Libertas Dive just as much, but that story is still very young and under development. I'm enjoying the process of writing for both The Aeternus Universe and The Libertas Dive. Hopefully, people can accept or ignore the stats at the end of every chapter on The Libertas Dive, but it's okay if they don't. You're a great reviewer, SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST. Most don't give respectful and accurate reviews. You do. I appreciate that you don't call me an idiot or worse. It disappoints me there aren't more readers like you.
easyread:I appreciate the praise for The Aeternus Universe. It's the story that's benefited the most from The Ancients World. I hope people come to enjoy The Libertas Dive just as much, but that story is still very young and under development. I'm enjoying the process of writing for both The Aeternus Universe and The Libertas Dive. Hopefully, people can accept or ignore the stats at the end of every chapter on The Libertas Dive, but it's okay if they don't. You're a great reviewer, SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST. Most don't give respectful and accurate reviews. You do. I appreciate that you don't call me an idiot or worse. It disappoints me there aren't more readers like you.