Tbh, I've only read until chapter 22 because the MC is bad and waiting for character development for 39 chapters isn't worth the read. Author could've made the character development in a much shorter time frame than having to wait almost 40 chaps, I GUARANTEE that most of your readers have dropped the story because of how long the character development is. The writing quality is amazing since you can really understand the story well and the Grammer mistakes are next to none. The story can be slow at some points but it fleshes out the side characters well. All in all the story is great I love it but the MC is really off putting and some readers can't handle that, including me. If you can handle waiting for a character development then try this story out, it's good. If you can't then don't waste your time reading this.
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LIKEYeah, MC still sucks. I'm at chapter 78 right now. MC by asking repeatedly "who are you", "are you Allen", "you ARE Allen" something like that shows how shallow his character development is. Just imagine, someone transform in front of you, and you ask three times or more questions to confirm something which is obviously true.
Im at 120 and he is still a moron except now he lets people walk all over him and insult him at the academy. Also his ‘maids’ pretend not to be his maids in the Academy which literally defys the point of the story. All in all, it’s extremely frustrating
InSC:Yeah, MC still sucks. I'm at chapter 78 right now. MC by asking repeatedly "who are you", "are you Allen", "you ARE Allen" something like that shows how shallow his character development is. Just imagine, someone transform in front of you, and you ask three times or more questions to confirm something which is obviously true.