Look, I sacrificed and read everything (64 ch's), I don't know why the author dragged such a bad start, he wanted to show a character evolution while increasing the mc's strength, but it took a long time and I bet that's why he lost so many readers , it was a good read, I don't lie, I liked what happened from chapter 45 on, it was torture to read before that, but it was good even after the fight with the noble devil , it has potential, but you need to prepare to read in 40 very frustrating chapters, until this chapter the mc will be weak, fearful, perverted, cowardly... so far it was the worst mc I've ever seen, but in chapter 40, something happens to him that changes everything, besides changing his personality, he gets stronger and more confident, in addition to correcting some of his flaws, he doesn't become the best mc's, but he's readable. The story is good, after chapter 40 it gets very interesting, if you wait until then, you'll like it. Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't complain about this, I didn't find any errors) Update stability: 5.0 (I don't follow since the beginning, but since I started every day new chapters have been posted) Story development: 5.0 (the story is great, it has everything to last a hundred chapters, but the MC development is depressing and frustrating because it takes so long) Character designs: 1.0 (only 4 things are quoted from the characters: whether he's handsome or not, apparent age, hair color and whether he's fat or thin, it's kind of hard to imagine the characters with these descriptions where they don't even talk about details , not even for the main characters) World Background: 2.0 (difficult to assess, almost nothing has been presented yet) PS; But the next arc has a lot of potential, I confess that I'm a little excited about it, so I can increase my score more, remembering that the soap opera is at the beginning, there's a lot to happen, I'm not offending this comment, but I give my honest opinions about romance.
Daoist_Little_Yun
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LIKEwell i hate your mc so much but romance has a future and since mc is changing there is no reason not to give it a go.
Daoist_Little_Yun:I admire your persistenceimage
Author made really great start. In first 40 chapters he shows character of MC, who practically never left his house so it's normal that he is cowardly and naive. You can't be angry at author for that and after ch40 he has breakthrough in his character so for me it's great start. Same for world background author doesn't need to write at beginning about whole world because MC doesn't know about it much himself and you should focus on area near MC. Would you like to see dump od useless information? And talking about unreadable starts there is nothing, which hurts while reading, you can even treat first 40chapters like comedy unlike MVS which has worst ever start and I can't get through it.
BL00DY:Author made really great start. In first 40 chapters he shows character of MC, who practically never left his house so it's normal that he is cowardly and naive. You can't be angry at author for that and after ch40 he has breakthrough in his character so for me it's great start. Same for world background author doesn't need to write at beginning about whole world because MC doesn't know about it much himself and you should focus on area near MC. Would you like to see dump od useless information? And talking about unreadable starts there is nothing, which hurts while reading, you can even treat first 40chapters like comedy unlike MVS which has worst ever start and I can't get through it.
BL00DY:Author made really great start. In first 40 chapters he shows character of MC, who practically never left his house so it's normal that he is cowardly and naive. You can't be angry at author for that and after ch40 he has breakthrough in his character so for me it's great start. Same for world background author doesn't need to write at beginning about whole world because MC doesn't know about it much himself and you should focus on area near MC. Would you like to see dump od useless information? And talking about unreadable starts there is nothing, which hurts while reading, you can even treat first 40chapters like comedy unlike MVS which has worst ever start and I can't get through it.
Ouroboros001:I like reviews like this because I now know where to skip to and try and read this sucker. đ