Awesome worldbuilding and very little grammar mistakes are things I love, however, mind numingly dumb story development, is something I don't like. I read upto the point where Arnold, Grey and the unknown Elliot encountered and defeated the s class phantom, but couldn't continue. Why, just why, does Arnold want to save the Elliot so bad, there is just no logical reason. The Elliot had only been cruel and ruthless, not making a good enough impact to make Arnold attached, but he still desperately wanted to save her, risking his life in the process. It just makes no sense. I'm going to give story about 4 stars only because of the awesome world building.
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