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CriticalReader

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2021-02-28 JoinedGlobal
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Posted

    The mc has a twisted mind, so he is very unpredictable and interesting As far as the writing goes, no major errors and is easy to understand Worldbuilding is sufficiently detailed and easy to visualize Characters are consistent and have well defined traits The story develops at a slower pace after the prologue, however it still maintains suspense Updates are regular Mc is chaotic evil and his madness is only getting worse, no hints of poison Recommended to evil mc readers

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    Devil Slave (Satan system)
    Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Posted

    This is what a rational and ruthless mc is supposed to be Writing quality is good... understandable, not monotonous but there are some translation errors Characters are the best aspect of the novel... there maturity and intellect match their age Plot is consistent, well paced, has tension and keeps you in suspense Worldbuilding... its a fanfic Updates are irregular Most importantly, the mc is neutral evil so no romance, harem or savior complex

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    Reborn into Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · lonhet
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Replied to Kobeni_GOD

    also join the dark novel discord

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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Replied to Kobeni_GOD

    A Man's Insanity:A Changing World The Giant Who Travels Through the Martial Arts World Conquer the Ninja World MANEUVER OF FILTH Devil Slave (Satan system) Prototype: Apex Predator Naruto: The Descent Of Darkness all on webnovel

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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Replied to Crassus

    mc is a simp and a pushover... not even close to being evil

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    Eldritch Creature's Guide
    Fantasy · Trafford
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Replied to Kobeni_GOD

    good recommendation but its been dropped

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    MANEUVER OF FILTH
    Eastern · ARSENAL_2
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Posted

    One of the best evil protagonist novels on this site Quality of writing is very good with no major errors that distract you Worldbuilding is detailed and revealed without leading to info dumps Plot moves at an appropriate pace and has sufficient foreshadowing for future events Characters are fleshed out and with clearly defined traits The only issue being the updates which are unstable but i am in anticipation of future chapters If you like evil mcs then this is for you... guaranteed no poison

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    MANEUVER OF FILTH
    Eastern · ARSENAL_2
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Replied to DaruisSupreme124

    that is the most interesting aspect about him

    Ch 2 Transmigration of a Murderer...
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    Devil Slave (Satan system)
    Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Replied to InternetSaint

    being rational means making the optimal choice irregardless of cruelty or kindness

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    Reborn into Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · lonhet
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Replied to InternetSaint

    that's not cruelty but being rational

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    Reborn into Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · lonhet
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader11mth
    Replied to typicalanimewatchr

    I agree... horrible ending

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    HxH: The Applications Of Nen
    Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader1yr
    Commented

    nice development for the mc... hope to see more of it

    Ch 1 Enough
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    Search the same title it's there bruv
    Fantasy · CovidCandy
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader1yr
    Replied to Carbon_6597

    thanks for the review... from the synopsis, i had guessed that the author was making excuses... my doubts are now confirmed

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    I Will Kill The Author
    Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader1yr
    Posted

    this novel is an exercise in patience... an important scene is occurring but a random info dump appears minor arcs take an exaggerated amount of time (almost 50 chapters)... in that time frame the world is at a stand still... enemies wait for mc to come back before taking action and mc's allies are worthless, relying on mc's plot armor to save them... one of the most disgusting cliches is present(mc appearing at the last moment to save the day)... the world revolves around mc and nothing happens when he is absent characters swagger around pretending to be mature and intelligent but at no moment are you convinced... for the sake of face entire organizations follow in the footsteps of one idiotic member to jump into the fire pit... characters are only defined by one or two traits so no surprise they act like cardboard cutouts it feels like mc has a halo which attracts hatred... it is baffling how so many random characters hate mc even though mc has proven he can cultivate extremely well conflicts are forced and you find yourself reading what feels like a fight between kids... for this reason practically all characters are plot devices doing random things to progress the plot novel is the same generic xianxia only with much slower pacing

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    The Revenant King of Rubrum
    Fantasy · MidnightMK
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader1yr
    Replied to Justowenbeingowen

    so its another fake monster novel

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    The Black Necromancer
    Fantasy · Nilo_A
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader1yr
    Commented

    sitting for so long and popping pills makes these 'cultivators' braindead... always acting arrogant like there on crack

    Ch 11 Visitors are Guests and Should Be Killed
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    My Cultivation Prowess Peaks after I Buried the Great Emperor's Corpse
    Eastern · Green Mountain Demon
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader1yr
    Commented

    mc has strong, ruthless and mature mentality... most mcs would be the opposite ... there is nothing fun to read about a weak minded, naive and immature character

    Ch 8 System's Origin
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    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader1yr
    Commented

    benefits are all that matter to villains... good chapter

    Ch 7 First Kill
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    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader1yr
    Commented

    the cringe is unbearable (anime tropes make both this novel and light novels mediocre)... good luck with next novel

    Ch 12 Disciplining the royal family
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    My Three Yandere Wives
    Fantasy · Kurupts
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  • CriticalReader
    CriticalReader1yr
    Commented

    too many lame anime tropes... at least pick the good ones... they exist

    Ch 11 Royal family?
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    My Three Yandere Wives
    Fantasy · Kurupts
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