Review Detail of Queen_Karina in Fulfilling Life of an Urban Time Manipulator
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⚠️ Slight ntr warning chapter 17⚠️, besides that everything was good. Scroll to have a summary for the ntr bit Mc and his mom have a promise about her waiting 8-10 years to be with Mc since he was 6 years old at the time… during this chapter the mc comes home and finds his mom making out with some guy, mc cry’s and goes to room, mom and guy argue the she slaps him and he leaves. Mom begs for forgiveness while crying since mc is all she has. Mc ignores her for a week then the have a heart to heart and reconcile. Apparently the guy has been Pershing her for 4 years and came to her house and forcefully kissed her, and since the mom is s**ually frustrated she got turned on by the kiss and that’s when the mc walked in. (This is the only ntr part in the story)
Fulfilling Life of an Urban Time Manipulator
drunken_undrunk
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Why did you even have to include that in the story.? I just don't understand. Why was it important to add this nuisance into this story? Why try spoiling your own novel!?
drunken_undrunk:yeah, that's all what happened in brief.
It was the time when I just started writing and it isn't such a big thing. It's the male ego that stops everyone from going forward as every other part of the story is at least a bit enjoyable.
iTz_Hades:Why did you even have to include that in the story.? I just don't understand. Why was it important to add this nuisance into this story? Why try spoiling your own novel!?
drunken_undrunk:It was the time when I just started writing and it isn't such a big thing. It's the male ego that stops everyone from going forward as every other part of the story is at least a bit enjoyable.
Yeah, it's like a situation where a freshly cooked and prepared dish made with Wagyu Beef becomes worth of nothing when accidently a waiters hair fell into it.
Daoist_Culture:Hello, did you edit that ntr chap? I hate stuff like that
ZhourongHephaestus:Yeah, it's like a situation where a freshly cooked and prepared dish made with Wagyu Beef becomes worth of nothing when accidently a waiters hair fell into it.image
drunken_undrunk:It was the time when I just started writing and it isn't such a big thing. It's the male ego that stops everyone from going forward as every other part of the story is at least a bit enjoyable.