Review Detail of MUHACHE_JUMA in Her mercy to His penitence
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Hello my dearest readers and viewers. Author over here shamelessly giving myself a five star. This book was inspired by a close friend's university experience with her first love. it's got a mix of romance, regret, betrayal and simply learning to live after a terrible experience. Whenever I hear someone say that they dont believe in real love, i feel that those words come from deep inside. Either the person had an ugly experience or someone close to them had something similar. Love is a beautiful thing but the most beautiful version of love is loving oneself before loving another. your reviews, comments and votes are my motivation. Help me through this journey by your gracious encouragement. Thank you in advance and hope you will enjoy this book.
Her mercy to His penitence
MUHACHE_JUMA
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Author can you give a little spoiler and tell if there’s really romance in this novel. Romance as in real romance and not of asshole LorenZo’s fake romance and love with Jasmine. Is there any other male lead ?? I really want to give it a try though seeing Jasmine being played as if she is a toy just because of a jealousy of a girl is truly infuriating. So seeking a little solace in knowing that Jasmine will truly find her true love?
@wakanda. you have to read a story to the end to be able to give such an opinion . I dont mind though. if it helps you feel better. feel free to look for something better to read. it's a free world by the way. Additionally , it doesn't cost much to be polite even in giving criticism . it might be actually quite helpful. otherwise, just enjoy the book. if it's not as per your taste, find something else which is to your liking. thank you.
He is not guilty at all. He only felt regret. Jasmine wouldn't have committed suicide if it wasn't for the insult, harass, rudeness and if his friends didn't play with her. I think he is not a coward but a puppet. His friend always manipulates him. He just obeys them for what they want him to do. How can he say beloved? Your story seems like too much fictional, i though based on true story. For sure, in the end, Lorenzo and Jasmine will still be together. Writer, if this is the end of your story, it will only lose its uniqueness.
The story has two volumes. the first is complete and the second is on going. fret not. unless I for some reason can't completely write, I like to finish whatever I started. Hope you enjoy your read
Najad_Sahari:I've only read 9 chapters. 1st impression - beautifully written with minor mistakes that edits can help. M skeptical though when I saw a piece that is still ongoing after 1 year. I'm hoping that the story is below or about 300 chapters