He is not guilty at all. He only felt regret. Jasmine wouldn't have committed suicide if it wasn't for the insult, harass, rudeness and if his friends didn't play with her. I think he is not a coward but a puppet. His friend always manipulates him. He just obeys them for what they want him to do. How can he say beloved? Your story seems like too much fictional, i though based on true story. For sure, in the end, Lorenzo and Jasmine will still be together. Writer, if this is the end of your story, it will only lose its uniqueness.

He is not guilty at all. He only felt regret. Jasmine wouldn't have committed suicide if it wasn't for the insult, harassment, rudeness and if he and his friends didn't toyed with her. I think he is not only coward and man enough but a puppet. His friends always manipulates him. He always obey them for what they want him to do. How can he say beloved? Your story seems like too much fictional, i though based on true story. For sure, in the end, Lorenzo and Jasmine will still be together. Writer, if this is the end of your story, it will only lose its uniqueness.