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the story is really interesting, the world is practically alive on it's own(the tutorial part is a bit too close to the tutorial arc of The Second Coming of Gluttony for comfort tho). My main problem here are the characters cause they are too unreasonable or completely not self aware(this may be a bit comedic at times tho), the unreasonableness is my main problem cause at times it's just not that needed or is every person on the tutorial a criminal before being reborn ? Cause dudes have not even a slight of reasonable common sense. Even the big bad villain is actually a spoiled brat that thinks he's the smartest person alive. Also it just makes no sense that the tutorial becomes an absolute bloodbath when they are literally scrapping every soldier they can to hold their defense positions, they just needed to have a bit of supervision on the first floor, just a bit and they would have 300 or so more soldiers even if just cannonfolder, but beggars can't be choosers and they clearly NEED more soldiers to remain holding their forts, it just makes no sense that they just don't care about loosing 300 potential soldiers cause of stupid stuff. Anyway mostly me ranting but it just became too unbearable to remain reading without even complaining a bit about these stuff.

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I disagree. Killing them will not impact the big picture. You might think, that 300 are a lot, but in the grand scheme of things, that matters little. There is especially good quote from Napoleon “what one should really fear is not a competent enemy, but an incompetent ally". These people would change nothing, their fear or lack or power in such a world would only bring demise to their teammates. If you read to at least a part where he sparred with Gwen, you would know that 300 people are just one punch away, not even worth as a cannon fodder, more like air since their sacrifice would not even amount to second in the real battlefield with that kind of power. They would just probably die by the shockwave of one blow between two elites.. so yeah