I hope the author sees this. The improvement and the format improves dramatically over the chapters which I was really happy about, and the details are plenty! I loved the development of the protagonist! I noticed we get to enoy 2 main characters which is awesome! I see it hasn't been updated but I got addicted. To the author, evilmunky45, may you please comeback! Your writing style is fantastic and has much potential. I don't want to give you anything less of a perfect score. This world you are making is too cool. I felt compelled to write this hoping you read it. Please come back and write so that my stability of updates score on this book can be true!! I need more! \(T~T)/ I will reread this again if you update it!
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LIKEThank you so very much for your kind words! It truly means a lot that you took your time to review my unfinished story, I am even more surprised onhow you found it especially since it isn't new and hasn't really been updated!? However I made a mock up for a new book cover that I hope you'll like. It is a little botchy but in my opinion better than the previous default one at least. Seeing your comments and enthusiasm has sparked a small fire in me to continue this journey after having gone through some of the toughest harships since I last wrote which killed any ambition to write. I have looked back at notes that I had and will finish the next chapter to continue from Sil's perspective in Chapter 5. I would appreciate any and all feedback if you decide to stick around! In the meantime, please feel free to share with others and have some patience it on uploads
evilmunky45:Thank you so very much for your kind words! It truly means a lot that you took your time to review my unfinished story, I am even more surprised onhow you found it especially since it isn't new and hasn't really been updated!? However I made a mock up for a new book cover that I hope you'll like. It is a little botchy but in my opinion better than the previous default one at least. Seeing your comments and enthusiasm has sparked a small fire in me to continue this journey after having gone through some of the toughest harships since I last wrote which killed any ambition to write. I have looked back at notes that I had and will finish the next chapter to continue from Sil's perspective in Chapter 5. I would appreciate any and all feedback if you decide to stick around! In the meantime, please feel free to share with others and have some patience it on uploads