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DarkX24
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to put it simply the book is boring, at first it was interesting but as you continue. the book gets boring with the main character just studying and keeping to himself and talking to Hermione all the time (Hermione isn't friends with Harry or Ron in this version) the MC doesn't have anything going in with himself, he makes himself look like a super smart guy yet he provokes Malfoys all the time a get hurt for it. the MC doesn't follow cannon, which would be fine if the author made it interesting just using whatever happing with the MC but they don't to there's an endless cycle of him watching Ron and Harry fail without heromoine and him sturdy and training (which they don't even make interesting sides on one occasion) overall the book isn't badly written, it is just boring to read. it was not able to hold my attention so I stopped ready in the '50s but if someone who's read it all and tells me it get better I'll give it another go

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SrCuervo
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Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.