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DarkX241mthReplied to Anonymossidc, I stop reading this book once I realized animal abuse was gonna be a thing, cry abt it
"Don't worry, Zubat. You are my Pokémon now, I won't hurt you anymore. Drink it, this is your food."- DarkX246mthReplied to CMDR_Palps
You don't have to abuse an animal to get it to listen
"Sure enough, you want to do it the hard way. Remember, this is what you asked for." Seeing Zubat looking at him as prey, Alex's eyes became cold and immediately turned on the button of the flashlight. The flashlight was aimed at Zubat, who was fearfully looking at him. - DarkX248mthCommented
Why does bro sound like a medieval noble men, are we sure dude was born this century
"Dangerous? After seeing how strong we are, do you still fear lowly F-Rank monsters, Iris? Let's go, I shall protect you, if that gives you some reassurance," said Noah, walking downstairs as Iris could not help but follow her new 'lord'. - DarkX248mthCommented
Nah man I might need to drop this book. After that 😭
"Prepared to fight an S-Rank? Those are at the pinnacle of the world, Noah-sama! …Eh? Did I call you Noah-sama?!" asked Iris. - DarkX248mthReplied to Draekan
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"Prepared to fight an S-Rank? Those are at the pinnacle of the world, Noah-sama! …Eh? Did I call you Noah-sama?!" asked Iris. - DarkX249mthCommented
Bro is abt to whitewash their God
"However, I have decided now that I want to have my own body to move around. I want to see what a human feels like and see if you are really as weak as I think you are. Since this is going to be my new body, It's going to be extremely weak. I hope you guys can help me stay strong and protect me from everything else." - DarkX249mthCommented
Bro got short term memory, he confirmed to the kid his their god than act surprised that the kid thinks he is their god
Ning was surprised at how quickly Hyesi accepted the fact that he was a god. 'Inikaka… wasn't that what they worshipped this morning? Is that what he thinks I am?' he wondered. - DarkX249mthReplied to levi_Hodgin
Yeah at this point I will, cause these authors need a good example to base their women on
"I guess you really think I'm an idiot, all muscle and no brain, don't you?" Buke replied, shaking Jade off of his arm, "You have no idea what we have been through together." - DarkX249mthReplied to sfkq
Lol im not reading it, so fancy that sicko
Tesse gave shrill cries every time the goblin thrust into her, the pain was unbearable, but soon the sounds died out. - DarkX249mthReplied to sfkq
I'm glad we both agree ur sick
Tesse gave shrill cries every time the goblin thrust into her, the pain was unbearable, but soon the sounds died out. - DarkX249mthCommented
Bro gotta buy the dlc
<You can unlock them through your task later on> - DarkX249mthCommented
Bro has eyes in the back of his head now
'Oh, what's this? Is my little toy trying to protect me.' wondered Gray as he watched the situation without so much as turning his head. - DarkX249mthCommented
Lol doesn't wanna offend religion but is fine with writing women as sex slaves and servants. How considerate
"god has not forsaken us, this is merely a trial. The day of judgment is nearing, repent now so that you may not be denied the eternal kingdom. Hey there young ones, won't you stop to hear the word of god?" said a man dressed in a church clergy's robe. (AN: I put a small g for god to avoid any religious complaints. Remember this is a fictional novel, although it got some inspiration from actual religions in real life, in no way or form is it regarding the actual holy churches. I do not want to offend anybody's religion.) - DarkX249mthReplied to eli_West
She's not tho
'Master is rather queer. I wonder if the demon that answered my prayer was actually him,' thought Tesse as she stared back at Gray. - DarkX249mthPosted
The comment section alone is a cesspit, full of wana-be rapists and edge lords. The book itself is unnecessarily graphic and at the same time it tries to censor itself which doesn't work out, you either go full force or you censor it. I saw books like this that make the gore work but for this they just zero in on rape, which alone is disgusting and weird. The concept of merging worlds can work if the person writing the story was better. The writing style is a bit odd, it gives "this is the first book I written" vibes in the way they write sentences.Overall if I knew what I was getting into I wouldn't even read this.
- DarkX249mthReplied to Captain_Fighter_6914
Your disgusting
"T-this b-body .. yours. D-do as y-you p-please," replied Tesse as Gray held the tip of his sword to her throat. - DarkX249mthReplied to sfkq
Your disgusting and anyone like you are disgusting
Tesse gave shrill cries every time the goblin thrust into her, the pain was unbearable, but soon the sounds died out. - DarkX249mthCommented
Getting repetitive now you really don't have to keep saying it
"Aaakh, akkhhh!"(AN: Goblin screams. Ye, SFX are childish but whatever.) - DarkX249mthCommented
She is way to easily impressed, she should raise her standards
'He is a real Vampire' she thought inwardly as she started liking this boy more and more.