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Askook
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The author wants feedback so he shall have it, I'm on chapter 19 and so far the book is really good, dont mind people saying the pace is slow, to me it is just fine for character development and plot progession. The only advice I feel I should give is to give us some ais pov, I know its her character but she feels like the npc in your party before you do their questline, all she does is follow the mc and only talks when the mc does, but the shopping seen gave me some hope, I dont know what direction you want ais to be so just take my option as what I feel so far. oh also some character pictures would be cool.

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Danmachi - Card Wizard

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Thanks for the review, I'll add some of Ais's POV as for the picture, honestly I don't know hot to create one and you probably never saw someone worse than me in drawing so I really can't do it :s