Shireneko
I'm pretty lazy and love to sleep
Writing
of reading
1991
Read books
Then why not stay in school if it's so important to you?
Everything went well until chapter 18 and 19. I'd recommend the author to simply remake those two since they make no sense at all. However, it is your fanfic so feel free to do whatever. Otherwise, the characters seems fine (except ch.18-19), the writing is good and well the world background is MHA. Overall, great work (except ch.18-19) and good luck :)
I was half expecting him to call the president as Law and ask for Pantu and then when Horizon leave the country, he too leaves, with all of his industries and everything, making Japan's economy fall even worse[img=recommend]
Divine? It's next step after Diamond I guess
Honestly, I liked the work. However, this is getting boring and frustrating. Why? Here are the reasons: 1. He gets trampled on and insulted for no fucking reason 2. Random people who insult him comes at every chapter, always a different one 3. He can't get any fucking revenge or anything. The thing that came closest was when he was about to hit the guy but was stopped by the system for no fucking reason and then he was more insulted while he kept his head down... So The character is meek, doesn't have any dignity and probably a person with a shitty personality since people are ready to kill him for a university project... Overall, could have been a great novel but all those faceslapping moments but without the face slapping part simply ruined it. To the author, I hope you can go far with your novel eitherway, good luck.
Hum, Momo, the ear girl and the inventor girl, he slept with all 3 did he not?
As always, loved the chapter altough I'm pumped to see where this will be going. He could make a store or a distributor's machine where people put in cash to get access to the map someway so that he doesn't have to sell it anymore. Well anyway I love your novel keep up the great work :)
I love the novel. However, I must say that the fact that any user of the map can spy on another, any time, meaning when one go to the toilet, changes or have s*x is slightly disturbing. At least, if there was some kind of mosaic in the map for these kind of things that’d be better in my opinion. Finally, I am excited to see where this will go. Will he buy a shop in the kingdom and teleport there for business each morning, will he get a protection function to protect his maps, will he continue to get quests which is supposedly weird for system to give so much, will he make some friends or something? :). Thanks again :)
I seem to remember another story with the same sort of cheat, something about a cultivator, living on another earth and fighting along the human race against other alien races in the universe
Miserable life but weighting 200kg? Yeah right
I haven't laughed like that for a long time, thanks hahaha