Review Detail of LionessLover in The Familia Head was Reborn as a Wolf in Another World

bro some people dont know stuff such as venomous snakes aren't poisonous but it is a common misconception that alot of people have cause they dont bother to do a quick google search about it still it doesn't make the person as uneducated as you say they are for example what you just pointed out could be said about you for you might not know some information that the other person does that is seemingly common sense to them does that make you uneducated **: just sayin that the second part of your statement was not as solid

in colloquial terms, we call venom poison dumbass. yes poison is something you ingest that causes your death while venom has to go through your bloodstream BUT venom is basically a part of the wider poison family ALSO venom CAN be poisonous too, that's even without considering that any place in your intestans that have the slightest of injury will react with the Venum. so you're the uneducated smartass who thinks they know shit when they don't. now **** off

Calling someone a kid just because their grammar isnt the best is just plain fucking childish

Your an A hole. Why don't you lay out some work for everybody else to read, rather then bullying people you believe to be 'Kids' on the internet.

It's something a lot of people don't know until they're told. You're calling him a kid but still think it's smart to tell him to go BACK to school? And everything on this site is an *******'s/hobbyist's work. From the translations to the original works users put up. If you want quality pieces of fiction this is the wrong place to be looking for it, m*ron. If you want to pretend to be better than other people then the first requirement is not being a total dumb*ss yourself dude.

The **** word was ama tu er's. Don't know why it did that.

What's wrong with you? You are on a website for novice writers either trying to get better at writing or doing it as a hobby, yet you come here and insult them for not putting out work to your standards. I say insult and not criticism because what you did was just trying to put someone down, not clearly explaining what they did wrong. Maybe you should go back to school to make some friends, maybe learn a little more about how to be a decent person as well. Next time why don't you try nicely telling the author what they did wrong, instead of just rudely insulting them and discouraging them from writing.

What is wrong with YOU! It is beyond stupid to accept such ridiculously low quality. I'm not an English native speaker and had to learn it too, and I once too had to write (academic) papers in English for the first time. So I know what it entails. Only with complete disregard, laziness and not doing your research do you end up with such garbage grammar. If YOU want to excuse such abominations of horror texts, please feel free to do so. Just don't be so ignorant and to demand this of others too.

The grammar is terrible, don’t try to defend it. I’ve been to many places with a diverse set of people. Who had to learn the language. Those people, as bad as their handwriting might be, have far better skills than this. This trash is not novice writing. But lazy, thrown-together ideas, with lack of care for the people reading it.

Dumb

I just do not understand people sometimes.